Ms I am a local 2,254 Posted February 11, 2018 Share Posted February 11, 2018 So, I have been working for this instrumental. This is from a project that I want to work on, when we finish the actual project between @Jessica Germ and @monster4life231. The concept is really simple. No Teardrops For Teddy Bears (the actual name of the album this single will be on) is an album that will represent self-acceptance, and will talk about social issues that can affect children, teenagers, in general. “Teddy Bears” is a reference to children btw. I made this record to help me deal with my enternal demons, just because Inwas having some struggles with self-acceptance, now I’m better, and I feel like more artist should do more albums like this concept that I have. I hope you really like this first single! Thank you! If you want to listen to more music from me, you can visit me in my YouTube channel! https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCReCtsIJMLpKeU1UYca_Z0Q Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms I am a local 2,254 Posted February 11, 2018 Author Share Posted February 11, 2018 Thank you @NIGHTCRAWLER for being so supportive! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted February 11, 2018 Share Posted February 11, 2018 Just now, LadySkrillex said: Thank you @NIGHTCRAWLER for being so supportive! Thank you you for sharing your music with us!!! I'm gonna give you my opinion, I'm gonna be a lil rough on details but DO NOT think it's bad. The concept is really cool, but the production could be better tbh. For example, the drums aren't loud enough on the verses. Also the beat is very classic, you should work on it to make it more intricate and interesting (reverb, echoes, hi-hats, multiple snares, ...). Also, according to my tastes, it should be more consistent, there are too much information especially in the chorus. I'm kinda lost in it. Also I'd have liked to see the lyrics cause what you said about the themes made me want to read some lyrics. But as I said, it's details so don't worry, just giving you some feedback. Keep doing music !!!!!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms I am a local 2,254 Posted February 11, 2018 Author Share Posted February 11, 2018 2 minutes ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: Thank you you for sharing your music with us!!! I'm gonna give you my opinion, I'm gonna be a lil rough on details but DO NOT think it's bad. The concept is really cool, but the production could be better tbh. For example, the drums aren't loud enough on the verses. Also the beat is very classic, you should work on it to make it more intricate and interesting (reverb, echoes, hi-hats, multiple snares, ...). Also, according to my tastes, it should be more consistent, there are too much information especially in the chorus. I'm kinda lost in it. Also I'd have liked to see the lyrics cause what you said about the themes made me want to read some lyrics. But as I said, it's details so don't worry, just giving you some feedback. Keep doing music !!!!!!! Yeah, I’ll try to improve that, is still a demo, is not a final version, so there is still improvements to be made! Thanks for sharing some feedback! Have a nice day! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
August Blue 8,566 Posted February 11, 2018 Share Posted February 11, 2018 Very nice music!! I really enjoyed the pre-chorus and the chorus Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
jakob 6,049 Posted February 11, 2018 Share Posted February 11, 2018 I love your work It's amazing Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ordinarynam1310 2,453 Posted February 11, 2018 Share Posted February 11, 2018 The name sounds like this song came straight out from Moana soundtrack Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ms I am a local 2,254 Posted February 11, 2018 Author Share Posted February 11, 2018 22 minutes ago, ordinarynam1310 said: The name sounds like this song came straight out from Moana soundtrack I realized now 🤣 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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