Gagi 2,750 Posted August 22, 2019 Share Posted August 22, 2019 Hey y´all! Maybe someone wants to listen to my new song, it´s the first song I uploaded this year, I tried out some EDM. The song is a homage to my first virtual crush, Princess Peach from Super Mario haha Please tell me what I can do better so I can get better! Positive feedback is allowed too. Keep in mind that I´m (obviously) no professional producer and suck at mixing. Thank you for listening! Lyrics: Spoiler Verse 1 + 2 Maybe we run, I might run off I can’t keep the road too many mushrooms are in front of us Don’t look him in the eyes, the bad is upon us I know when to keep faith and you best believe in us we trust Pre-Chorus Cause that’s endless love Safe you from the lust of the turtle boss He won’t get you, no. Not long as I am yours, when I miss your touch - jump on all these thots, wander through the lands of the universe. Chorus Under the underground, no way is too long when you make that sound Your love is all I want, we’re on so many levels now You can’t do no wrong, level me up when I’m on the ground Never game over, just as long as i got you around... Bridge You’re better than 1 Up, better than a million coins I only got a billion lifes and you make ´em joy - my ****ing princess. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hades 27,980 Posted August 22, 2019 Share Posted August 22, 2019 The chorus is the catchiest part. The underground-sound -around 1-2-3 punch. Sounds more poppy which I like. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aleks 3,871 Posted August 22, 2019 Share Posted August 22, 2019 The chorus We don’t really need to talk too much, show each other what we know 🦋 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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