My new song

[Gagi 2,750]

Hey y´all!

Maybe someone wants to listen to my new song, it´s the first song I uploaded this year, I tried out some EDM. The song is a homage to my first virtual crush, Princess Peach from Super Mario haha

Please tell me what I can do better so I can get better! Positive feedback is allowed too. Keep in mind that I´m (obviously) no professional producer and suck at mixing.

Thank you for listening!

 

Lyrics:

Spoiler

Verse 1 + 2

Maybe we run, I might run off

I can’t keep the road too many mushrooms are in front of us

Don’t look him in the eyes,  the bad is upon us

I know when to keep faith and you best believe in us we trust

Pre-Chorus

Cause that’s endless love

Safe you from the lust of the turtle boss

He won’t get you, no.

Not long as I am yours, when I miss your touch -  jump on all these thots, wander through the lands of the universe.

Chorus

Under the underground, no way is too long when you make that sound

Your love is all I want, we’re on so many levels now

You can’t do no wrong, level me up when I’m on the ground

Never game over, just as long as i got you around...

Bridge

 

You’re better than 1 Up, better than a million coins

I only got a billion lifes and you make ´em joy - my ****ing princess.

 

 

[Hades 27,980]

The chorus is the catchiest part. The underground-sound -around 1-2-3 punch.   Sounds more poppy which I like. 

[Aleks 3,871]

The chorus