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Better Day

Here is my new song "After You"

 

It contains Elements of Yoü and I By Lady Gaga.



Been a long time since it came around. Been a long time since i've came after you.
This time i'm not leaving this town without you.

It's been ages since i've last saw you.
i'm coming back to this small town for you
I'm not leaving Alabama without you.
This journey after you is going to be long but it'll be worth it.


From Texas to Alabama i'm coming straight after you.
It's been 1 and a half years since i last saw you darling
I need you. I need you. I NEED YOU.


The road is very rough. I'm just walking in my converses.
I've stuck my ipod on. You and I is on.
My family didn't want me to leave but i just said "**** It"
and came after you.

From Texas to Alabama i'm coming straight after you.
It's been 1 and a half years since i last saw you darling
I need you. I need you. I need you, i need you, i need you really ****ing badly
i just want you back and back for good


This road is just long, I need you.
I hope your still stuck on me because i love you.

I'm near you know, I smell you.
Your long hair and tattoed body.
My body is full of excitment for seeing you again.
I'm still after you.
I need you, I need you, I need you.
My s-xy Alabama guy.

Been a long time since it came around. Been a long time since i've came after you.
This time i'm not leaving this town without you.
 

It's not the best written song in the world but it's my first attempt at writing a songs.
 

Together You And I!
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I kinda read it as an extended remix of You and I! Like how Gaga had those new lyrics in the Born This Way (Country Road Version) "If ya wanna make it country, baby it's okay. Cause I was born, I was born, I was born to be brave!" :music:

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Better Day

I kinda read it as an extended remix of You and I! Like how Gaga had those new lyrics in the Born This Way (Country Road Version) "If ya wanna make it country, baby it's okay. Cause I was born, I was born, I was born to be brave!" :music:

 

:hug:

It's very good tbh :golfclap:o8BFTzK.jpg

 

Thank You :runhug:

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Better Day

Rad!!!!!!! Has hecho un buen trabajo Consuela. :whip:

 

 

I like! :party:

 

Thank You :classy:

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Better Day

That's really raw & passionate :golfclap:

 

Thank You :whitney:

 

nice!

Thank you :whitney:

 

:noparty: I was hoping for a Consuela inspired song

 

You've gave me an idea :hor:

I like it, but the references to Texas and Alabama are just too freakin' random

 

Thank you, I know but it is You and I inspired.

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