Zombieboy should have ended with „Goodbye, I'll see you in my dreams“

[ToGa 74]

As the Titel says, I think Zombieboy should have ended with „Goodbye, I'll see you in my dreams“

I know that the song would have been quite short then with only 2:34 min but the end would have been so Iconic lyrically and unexpected in terms of progression of the song.

You‘d expect the chorus or something after the built up but you get nothing.

For me that would add a big replay factor just to satisfy my craving for the climax. 

The part that follows is repetitive and not that good.

What do you think?

Edited 12 hours ago by ToGa

[PopMusicForever 595]

I don’t think about any changes. It’s perfect the way it is. 

[Taumaturg0 263]

codas exist for a reason

[misha4ever 1,623]

I'm curious, are you white and male, OP?

[Head Empty 24,806]

The outro is one of my favorite moments on the album, so no 

[MACATL 1,283]

This is an incorrect post.  It’s perfect, outro and all.  

Edited 12 hours ago by MACATL

[GAYHEMikey 7,762]

It would be a terrible ending for the song 

you have Gaga’s „fantasy“ vocal build up following the „good bye I’ll see you in my dreams“ line. A climax. And then it skips to LoveDrug? That would be so disappointing 

Edited 12 hours ago by GAYHEMikey

[RochestrMonstr 2,797]

That (existing) outro puts gothic elements into a song that has a brilliant balance of darkness and brightness. I wouldn’t change a thing. 

Edited 11 hours ago by RochestrMonstr

[eifulien 2,908]

And eliminate her best song outro like EVER? No, sir! 

[ChvVolk 2,204]

The bridge is my least favorite part of the song. It's sung in a way that it reminds me of a school play. I think it should've been spoken word or whispered and then the "you're better off a fantasy " line could be the way it already is.

[dynamite 53,882]

No 

Edited 9 hours ago by dynamite

[Carl Grimes 567]

the outro is the best part, though.  it makes me levitate, it's so good.

[River 112,181]

this post is another proof why she's the artist and you're the public

[Bedazzler 4]

Noo, i hate tiktok length songs, it's perfect the way it is

[PartySick 153,360]

You can cut your version to that. Honestly, it might be a killer transition into LoveDrug or it'd sound great worked into a remix as the hook  

But personally, I like that she wasn't afraid to let the songs stick around on Mayhem. One of my biggest criticisms of Chromatica was that every song felt like it JUST got started and she's already rushing to the end  

All the outros and interesting twists Mayhem's tracks take are peak