Gen Z artRAVE 246 Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 So my best, best friend made this song a while back and i have been watching him make it, sweat and cry and all that! Please go show him some love! https://soundcloud.com/jen-jens-800538501/steven-go-to-prom-with-me-im-not-a-girl-or-girly-instrumental-version?si=776ed90efcd74328ad5364507477c7fc&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing This meat dress stinks <3 Link to post Share on other sites
weed 60,356 Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 (I'm not a girl or girly) but the song is good Link to post Share on other sites
Maxine Puth 3,785 Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 I have no idea how production works, so I applaud him for even getting this far with a concept. But I’ll be honest, it feels very quiet and muted out if that makes sense. Like some stems are too far in the background and there’s nothing really to carry the song until the guitar comes in. But I really like the ending. 2 Link to post Share on other sites
Gen Z artRAVE 246 Posted March 23 Author Share Posted March 23 29 minutes ago, weed said: (I'm not a girl or girly) but the song is good OOO yes! i will tell him and about the name...its the lyrics, wont make sense in the instrumental This meat dress stinks <3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
Gen Z artRAVE 246 Posted March 23 Author Share Posted March 23 15 minutes ago, Maxine Puth said: I have no idea how production works, so I applaud him for even getting this far with a concept. But I’ll be honest, it feels very quiet and muted out if that makes sense. Like some stems are too far in the background and there’s nothing really to carry the song until the guitar comes in. But I really like the ending. hmm i will def give him feedback like this, but keep in mind its the muted instrumentals, lyrics will carry This meat dress stinks <3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
TimotheeChalamet 1,357 Posted March 23 Share Posted March 23 1 hour ago, Gen Z artRAVE said: hmm i will def give him feedback like this, but keep in mind its the muted instrumentals, lyrics will carry Yeah I guess a full vocal production would make a huge difference but some parts need to stand out more in my opinion. It sounds a bit flat Link to post Share on other sites
Bowman 3,956 Posted March 24 Share Posted March 24 The rhythm is nice and the mixing sound cool, but feedback i'd give is that it needs more layers such as a nice bassline, catchy melody. They need to work on the structure a bit more too 𝕯𝕵, 𝖋𝖗𝖊𝖊 𝖒𝖞 𝖒𝖎𝖓𝖉 Link to post Share on other sites
Gen Z artRAVE 246 Posted March 24 Author Share Posted March 24 6 hours ago, Bowman said: The rhythm is nice and the mixing sound cool, but feedback i'd give is that it needs more layers such as a nice bassline, catchy melody. They need to work on the structure a bit more too will tell them! This meat dress stinks <3 1 Link to post Share on other sites
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