steven 4,358 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 The instrumental is kinda heavy and needs to be polished. Also, I would definitely work on the intro, the chorus and then the bridge to make it more timeless, less noisy. Her strong vocals needs to be enhanced too. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gracious Gaga 17,163 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 I would change the whole damn song ♥ Kindness Police. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Z 17,851 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 @boneknuckleskin here are some of Gaga's bridges: - The Fame: Don't ask me how are why, but I'm gonna make it happen this time - Bad Romance: walk walkk fashion baby - Born This Way: Don't be a drag, just be a queen - Perfect Illusion: where are you cuz I can't see Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
My Name Isnt Alice 3,737 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 Just don't change the pre-chorus that one was so good Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
not Chromatica 5,393 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 18 minutes ago, dynamite said: And maybe change the "look at me now" part it sounds kind of funny / lazy / Trisha Paytas Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
whore 11,440 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 The chorus needs to have more than “I want your stupid lo-love” and just cut out to the instrumental Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glamourpuss 29,062 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 7 minutes ago, boneknuckleskin said: I am not gonna lie I never really learned what a bridge is. I have googled it but I have a brain injury so I always forget stuff I learned.  I know a what a verse and chorus are. But is a bridge the part of a song that bridges the verse to the chorus or something else? Someone tell me what part is the bridge in the Stupid Love leak? What is the bridge in Applause or another one of her big songs so I have something to compare to?     It's when a song changes and has an extra part. For example in Bad Romance it's when she says walk walk fashion baby and sings the French bit. Corrected thanks to KevinSteve because I forgot the walk walk bit. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
not Chromatica 5,393 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 I'd add just a little more polish and finesse. You know, the stuff that you hear on your 180th listen and are like woooow, the detail   Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red 87,449 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 6 minutes ago, KEVIN STEVE said: I just noticed that Gaga has SOOOO many songs that don't have a bridge omg But when they do, oh boy, do they have a bridge Bad Romance, Marry The Night, Diamond Heart... iconic If you see me posting like crazy, I'm either bored or procrastinating. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
not Chromatica 5,393 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 Just now, Red said: But when they do, oh boy, do they have a bridge Bad Romance, Marry The Night, Diamond Heart... iconic But when they do they have like 3 bridges and each one is better then the previous. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhettoFabulous 18,501 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 Make the chorus bigger  make a bigger more dramatic bridge  and even add a dance break or something Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sorcerer 10,559 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 Add more lyrics after "I want your stupid love" in the chorus, not just some dance beats. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glamourpuss 29,062 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 1 minute ago, highlyreductive said: I'd add just a little more polish and finesse. You know, the stuff that you hear on your 180th listen and are like woooow, the detail   Yes! Like how Bloody Mary has so much detail. But I really like SL as it is though and think they could butcher it if they added too much. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red 87,449 Posted January 24, 2020 Share Posted January 24, 2020 Just now, highlyreductive said: But when they do they have like 3 bridges and each one is better then the previous. Judas’s three bridges  I need to listen to it right now, I’m needing epic in my day If you see me posting like crazy, I'm either bored or procrastinating. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
boneknuckleskin 776 Posted January 24, 2020 Author Share Posted January 24, 2020 5 minutes ago, KEVIN STEVE said: @boneknuckleskin here are some of Gaga's bridges: - The Fame: Don't ask me how are why, but I'm gonna make it happen this time - Bad Romance: walk walkk fashion baby - Born This Way: Don't be a drag, just be a queen - Perfect Illusion: where are you cuz I can't see Lemme go listen real quick     Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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