evgenigerm2 4,056 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 I have no idea if that's good and there are people who'd enjoy reading it. It's actually the very first time I've tried writing something like it. I was just going through a lot and I tend to feel at peace with myself when I take my time to sit down and write about it or record a short video going through my emotions, so that's what I did this time and it turned into this. Feel free to share your thoughts down below. Spoiler Y O U Is it okay If I have you tonight To see if I miss you Or I do not Is it okay If you hug me again To see if it will heal All of my pain I look at your photos And the memories Come back to my mind Like old enemies Thought you deserved it Now I’m not sure Turned out as the bad guy But there’s nothing I can do Can’t stop thinking of you And I hate myself for that Everyone keeps telling me That I should not Only the positive Haunts my mind I tend to be an optimist Even with the bad ones I’m kind Got my pink glasses on And a positive tune Yet inside I’m a mess Can’t stop thinking of you „I allow myself to fail. I allow myself to break. I'm not afraid of my flaws.“ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bubblegum Bitch 18,934 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 17 minutes ago, evgenigerm2 said: Got my pink glasses on And a positive tune Yet inside I’m a mess Can’t stop thinking of you The best part for me... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon x 4,081 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 Omg, I also wrote something a month ago called "Where are you" which had lyrics a lot like this. It was my first time writing something too. I like your poem by the way. It could so easily be turned into a song, the melody's already in my head. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
evgenigerm2 4,056 Posted October 26, 2019 Author Share Posted October 26, 2019 31 minutes ago, LazyTurtle said: The best part for me... ikr it's my favorite part as well, very powerful ending imo 5 minutes ago, JourneyToAvalon said: Omg, I also wrote something a month ago called "Where are you" which had lyrics a lot like this. It was my first time writing something too. I like your poem by the way. It could so easily be turned into a song, the melody's already in my head. tysm, i would love to read your piece if you're willing to share it X „I allow myself to fail. I allow myself to break. I'm not afraid of my flaws.“ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon x 4,081 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 2 minutes ago, evgenigerm2 said: tysm, i would love to read your piece if you're willing to share it X Awww! I didn't wanna steal your moment, haha but sure, since you asked. Spoiler Where are you We used to be just you.. and me then you went away to a place (so) far away I can't help but wonder what you are now up to are you breathing sunshine or rain clouds and thunder I wish we were together through sickness and hunger If it were up to me I'd never remember but our time was over (and) there's nothing I can-... do.. the things I used to do with you love was our only rescue I was just one shade of blue but that was until I met you I confess you were my first and the rest were always just a bit less They won't be ever like you I wish we were together for richer for poorer If it were up to me I'd never surrender but our time is up now and there's nothing-.. where.. are.. you. Sometimes I write in a journal when I'm at my lowest but I never wrote a song before. I tried to a few times but I'm so bad at it. I don't know how people do it. I wrote this one after I watched a really emotional anime about a boy who loses his boyfriend from suicide. So it's more based on his experiences than mine. Hope you like it! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blond 5,715 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 generic, but since you've just begun, i wish you good luck My pu$$y tastes like pepsi cola Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonatellaPop 3,482 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 Bro this is gorgeous! Get one of the GGD singers and make this a song ASAP! https://blacklivesmatter.com/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gagaschickens 4 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 34 minutes ago, DonatellaPop said: Bro this is gorgeous! Get one of the GGD singers and make this a song ASAP! should i sing this? i know my vocals snap and snatch wigs from sissies, but should i do it? ﾘのひ ᄃﾑ刀'ｲ 尺乇ﾑり ｲんﾉ丂, ᄃﾑ刀 ﾘのひ? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonatellaPop 3,482 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 1 minute ago, gagaschickens said: should i sing this? i know my vocals snap and snatch wigs from sissies, but should i do it? GO FOR IT! https://blacklivesmatter.com/ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gagaschickens 4 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 2 minutes ago, DonatellaPop said: GO FOR IT! ew no ﾘのひ ᄃﾑ刀'ｲ 尺乇ﾑり ｲんﾉ丂, ᄃﾑ刀 ﾘのひ? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
evgenigerm2 4,056 Posted October 26, 2019 Author Share Posted October 26, 2019 1 hour ago, JourneyToAvalon said: I wrote this one after I watched a really emotional anime about a boy who loses his boyfriend from suicide. So it's more based on his experiences than mine. Hope you like it! Spoiler I confess you were my first and the rest were always just a bit less They won't be ever like you this bit is my favourite, it sounds like an excerpt from a hit song „I allow myself to fail. I allow myself to break. I'm not afraid of my flaws.“ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
avalon x 4,081 Posted October 26, 2019 Share Posted October 26, 2019 Just now, evgenigerm2 said: Reveal hidden contents I confess you were my first and the rest were always just a bit less They won't be ever like you this bit is my favourite, it sounds like an excerpt from a hit song I literally just changed that last line before I posted it. It's the only part that really bugged me and this is the part you loved. But tbh, that makes your compliment even more meaningful and impactful (because I'm super self-critical and people tell me not to be). So thank you so much. Hope to see more stuff from you soon! Keep on writing, hun! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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