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"Pouring Rain" - Acoustic Demo of my song


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It's not in the best quality yet cuz everything was processed on my phone. So if you could suggest free PC softwares that can help me record and produce my songs. That'd be great. So anyways, i wrote this song all by myself using my guitar. It's about letting go of someone you love and then realizing afterwards that you still have feelings for that person. And like a "Pouring Rain" that you feel dripping in all over your body, all over you, from head to toe. I used that subject as a metaphor to describe this love that you still feel a lot, no matter how much you convince yourself that you're totally over it, and it still gets into your senses real hard. 

 

 

So yeah. Hope you like it, so again. disclaimer. it does not have the best sound because i didn't have proper equipments. So i'm hoping i could produce this (and my other songs) soon with proper tools, if you could suggest some i would appreciate it. Most preferably, free ones. Thanks.

 

 

Pouring Rain (Lyrics)

 

[Verse 1]

 

I'm aware that it's in my power to leave you now.

Build again all of the pieces of me that burned down.

After the storm, let the sun have its joyful day.

Well sad to say that, I'm barely even over you yet.

 

[Chorus]

Like the Pouring Rain, you pour down in my head, in my heart, everytime.

I know that i still love you cuz you still fall in my mind... like a Pouring Rain.

And i still love you so bad.

 

[Verse 2]

It's real cold outside the front door just like your touch.

The wind reminds me of the feeling when you're around.

I once believed there are many out there to choose from.

Now i figured, this heart continues to do it's best to follow you nonstop.

 

[Chorus]

Like the Pouring Rain, you pour down in my head, in my heart, everytime.

I know that i still love you cuz you still fall in my mind... like a Pouring Rain.

And i still love you so bad.

 

[Bridge]

Sorry if i keep trying, keep going to our beginning.

Promise now I'll be sincere, no more pretence and hiding from me.

I wrote this song for you, truly.

 

[Chorus]

Like the Pouring Rain, you pour down in my head, in my heart, everytime.

I know that i still love you cuz you still fall in my mind... like a Pouring Rain.

And i still love you so bad.

 

[Outro]

I'm aware that it's in my power to leave you now.

Build again all of the pieces of me that burned down.

 

 

 

 

 

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Girl Under You

Not gonna lie I came here expecting some mess but I actually love your voice! The lyrics are cute and well-written and I think the song overall will sound better with full production. Reminds me a little bit of Breathe by Taylor Swift in the verses lol

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The old Taylor can't come to the phone right now cause she got replaced by Kosh Tuansi:usrs:

But jokes aside, I really like the concept, I think it's a good song overall. 

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NIGHTCRAWLER

I agree with the others, the song totally sounds like a Taylor Swift ballad, however that's what I've thought the second you started singing! It's really cool but of course it needs a better production!

Keep doing music! :rockstar:

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Awh thank you everyone. This is my first time uploading an original song, which i admit is a bit scary for me cuz i don't know how people will react. and your comments are really inspiring. Definitely gonna keep it up:kara:

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And yes Taylor Swift is one of my biggest inspiration, but i also have pop/gaga-ish songs written. Looking forward to sharing them with y'all.❤

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