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So I recently mada a song, it's called "Delirium". It's my first song but I think it's ok :sweat:

Here it is:

Please tell me what you think about it :hug:

xoxo, Human

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I really like the idea, but you should try to make it a bit bigger and change some bits because it’s kinda repetitive

Otherwise, I really like it! :kara:

We don’t really need to talk too much, show each other what we know 🦋
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4 minutes ago, Aleks said:

I really like the idea, but you should try to make it a bit bigger and change some bits because it’s kinda repetitive

Otherwise, I really like it! :kara:

Thank you so much :kara:

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7 minutes ago, Doot said:

Good job! RedOne could neva :cryga:

Keep working and honing your craft! 

Thank you :kara:

Spoiler

inb4 Gaga steals my instrumental lmao

 

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8 minutes ago, Lucas said:

Bop!

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7 minutes ago, monster4life231 said:

Very good! :kara: 

 

3 minutes ago, Drin Lon said:

Bop af :music:

It's like Applause meets Ray Of Light

Good job :tony:  I could nevah (literally :poot:)

Thank you all :kara: I really appreciate it

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31 minutes ago, Lucas said:

Bop!

IqsTRTT.gif

lmao y'all play the song while watching this GIF, it's EVERYTHING ahahahahhaha

I like it! Congratulations and keep doing music ! 

Edit: I SWEAR SHE MOVES HER HEAD IN THE RHYTHM (she's lowkey chained to the rhythm) 

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Just now, NIGHTCRAWLER said:

lmao y'all play the song while watching this GIF, it's EVERYTHING ahahahahhaha

I like it! Congratulations and keep doing music ! 

Thank you :kara: I actually waited for your opinion :stalkga:

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NIGHTCRAWLER
5 minutes ago, xoxo Human said:

Thank you :kara: I actually waited for your opinion :stalkga:

you can be proud, I've listened to it again and it's really good.

I hope you'll do something with vocals and lyrics soon or later! :rockstar:

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