Rate my new song: "Working For Them"

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7 hours ago, Lazarus said:

I actually like the instrumental, it has a very robotic, nocturnal sound. As far as vocals go, though, you have potential!

Since I think that since it's clear you'd like to improve that vocal element, you might try working multiple layers of vocals together, rather than using AutoTune - Think the way that Taylor uses this trick, on the majority of her recent music. It gives her voice more breadth- Combining multiple layers of the main pitch with a few low and high pitch takes to create a very full effect, regardless of her actual vocal prowess in the song, if that makes sense. A lot of singers use this idea professionally, and it can teach you a lot.

Overall though, lots of improvement over previous demos I've heard from you and lots of potential. 

Yeah I agree that adding multiple layers of vocals gives a more clean and professional effect. And I use it quite often in my songs because it feels weird to have only one vocal track. In this one, I got multiple layers in the chorus. If you focus you can hear them, especially a deep voice, but I didn't want 'em to take all the attention. I recorded it when I was in that exhausting period then I wanted to keep the more "sincere" singing. But I agree with you on everything.

Thank you for taking the time to give me advice, also for following the work I share on GGD 

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7 hours ago, TimisaMonster said:

The instrumental is a bop

The vocals are ok, but the heavy autotune effect doesn't help

The lyrics are ok, but the chorus is understandable. The verses seems to not be as cohesive story wise to carry one train of thought

Overall, great effort and it is pretty relatable as well for everyone

Thank you for listening and giving your opinion on it !