DimitriLGCollector 1 Posted November 26, 2011 Share Posted November 26, 2011 Really? Oh, well, maybe that's true, I can't really tell, because the words don't sound that muffled to me.. but that's probably because I know them. :lol: *We’re moving slowly, hand in hand As they watch our every step It looks like we’re unwelcome here But what makes you think that I care? Cause I don’t give a damn, give a damn (Let them stare) I’m not letting go, so beware (Let them stare) I’m ready to fire back The mannequins are protecting their factory We are a danger to them Fake shine and smiles Oh, nothing seems to matter to me Cause now I’ve got you *I’ll pull you closer, hold you tight Even though they whisper that it’s wrong Won’t stop, and as the lightning strikes More heads are turning, feels so right And I’d do it again, it again (Make them stare) They better stay out of my way (Make them stare) I’m ready to fire back The mannequins are protecting their factory We are a danger to them Fake shine and smiles Oh, nothing seems to matter to me Cause now I’ve got you (And it feels so right) The mannequins are protecting their factory We are a danger to them Fake shine and smiles Oh, nothing seems to matter to me Cause now I’ve got you Oh, yes, I know what they are thinking (thinking) We are too human to fit in (fit in) We breathe, we think, we feel, and they can’t change us And we know, yeah, we know... *CHORUSx2 And it feels so right Cause now I’ve got you Feels so right, feels so right... Thanks, guys. I'm getting a studio mic on my birthday, so I'll get to recording other songs pretty soon. You really can make a really ****ing and big record with that kind of songs. + a s-xy voice : you got it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
LadyGagaTampon 272 Posted November 26, 2011 Share Posted November 26, 2011 I like your voice! :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes 12 Posted November 26, 2011 Author Share Posted November 26, 2011 I like your voice! :) I like your nickname... :rofl: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbuHassan1992 766 Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 please post some new lyrics! I'm a big fan of your music! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
LadyGagaTampon 272 Posted November 28, 2011 Share Posted November 28, 2011 I like your nickname... Thanks! :spin: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes 12 Posted December 5, 2011 Author Share Posted December 5, 2011 So okay, I got myself a semi-professional mic + studio headphones. We (me + my best friend) recorded a song we wrote together called Boundary. Here are the two versions of it (one is fully produced and the second one is semi-acoustic). BOUNDARY BOUNDARY (Acoustic) *A lonely spider spins my web of thoughts And stars are now my only company There’s just one thing that makes me stay awake Another „truth“ is more then I can handle * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? * „Goodbye“'s the word that freezes every clock There’s just one try to fix them, only one Our fragile „perfect†was my everything So hurry up, our time is running out * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? * If that’s not what you mean Why does it hurt so much? Why can't you understand? Why don't you understand? That I am the one... * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? P.S. I have a small part in it near the end. P.S.S. I hope the vocals are not too loud, I have three different mixes of each version, and I'm still not sure if the volume of the vocals is right. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirAlex 0 Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 So okay, I got myself a semi-professional mic + studio headphones. We (me + my best friend) recorded a song we wrote together called Boundary. Here are the two versions of it (one is fully produced and the second one is semi-acoustic). BOUNDARY BOUNDARY (Acoustic) *A lonely spider spins my web of thoughts And stars are now my only company There’s just one thing that makes me stay awake Another „truth“ is more then I can handle * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? * „Goodbye“'s the word that freezes every clock There’s just one try to fix them, only one Our fragile „perfect†was my everything So hurry up, our time is running out * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? * If that’s not what you mean Why does it hurt so much? Why can't you understand? Why don't you understand? That I am the one... * My wounded heart is in your hands tonight You took it with you right before you left me My wounded heart is in your hands tonight Will you decide to heal it or to break it? P.S. I have a small part in it near the end. P.S.S. I hope the vocals are not too loud, I have three different mixes of each version, and I'm still not sure if the volume of the vocals is right. Love it! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbuHassan1992 766 Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 wow, you have amazed me once again! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirAlex 0 Posted December 5, 2011 Share Posted December 5, 2011 Love All your stuff!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SidDays 244 Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Oh my gosh, you're seriously amazing. :o I really hope you make it big.Your friend is also an amazing singer. :D Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbuHassan1992 766 Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Do you have any tips on editing vocals? I struggle with editing for the chorus, I never get the big chorus-feel. I want it to sound like I have backup singers kind of, but it sounds so weird when i try to sing them myself (multiple recordings) any tips? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
display name 4,360 Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 First of all, I love it. I love both versions, but I prefer the acoustic one. It does more for the vocals, I think, and I don't think the vocals are too loud at all. Lastly, I love your part at the end. As I've said before, I love your voice. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes 12 Posted December 6, 2011 Author Share Posted December 6, 2011 First of all, I love it. I love both versions, but I prefer the acoustic one. It does more for the vocals, I think, and I don't think the vocals are too loud at all. Lastly, I love your part at the end. As I've said before, I love your voice. Oh my gosh, you're seriously amazing. :o I really hope you make it big. Your friend is also an amazing singer. :D Love All your stuff!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH, GUYS. I don't even know what to say besides "thank you" to express my gratitude to you for listening to my stuff. Do you have any tips on editing vocals? I struggle with editing for the chorus, I never get the big chorus-feel. I want it to sound like I have backup singers kind of, but it sounds so weird when i try to sing them myself (multiple recordings) any tips? First of all - don't record a song in one go. Record four-five takes of each part separately (1st verse, chorus, etc), pick the best ones (or combine the best parts of each take). The basic treatment for the chorus is to have three different takes of the lead vocal: one in the center channel, and two other ones turned down (pretty low in the mix, just to give the main vox some additional depth) and panned 100% (or 90%) left and right. Also you can record some harmonies... again - two different takes panned hard left & right. You'll have to make sure that the timing of everything is good beforehand and, if not, tweak the parts that are off. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashes 12 Posted December 14, 2011 Author Share Posted December 14, 2011 Just to bump the thread here's a short piano improvisation I recorded today (I love noodling around). I'll get to recording some new vocals tomorrow, and, if I'm lucky, I'll be done with one or two songs by Monday. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dirty Pony 5 Posted December 14, 2011 Share Posted December 14, 2011 This is amazing!! Is that you singing? :legend: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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