Nuke 1,691 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 I'm making the alternative booklet for Born This Way album. This is just a concept maybe i'll make some changes any suggestion is appreciated like should i add texutre? Different font, colors? And MTN isn't a font i made it using the BTW logo. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Velvet 10,988 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 Umm.. I am not a fan of the color palette, you could have done this... Dark pink for the hair on the cover Black and white fir background for both cover and booklet. I'm like some kind of supernova Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Head Empty 24,817 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 I love the visuals and the colors except for the metallic effect on the songtitles. It kinda messes with the legibility and doesn't really fit the rest of the style Happiness will never last, darkness comes to kick your ass... ᵃˢˢ 🕺 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
donutellha 13,819 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 Def add a little texture bc the pic / metal text have it, but I love it so far (even though im not a fan of the BTW logo) Also if you want to, add the lens flare to Marry the night (born this way has it between the O and R of "born") and try to reverse the effect on the M, because it looks odd compared to the rest, which match each other. It looks great btw! Walk down the runway but don't puke, it's okay. You just had 10 donuts today. Without frosting. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
donutellha 13,819 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 If you decided to not use the BTW logo (judging on the other comments), you could use the BTWB font, which is a tall thin san serif! Walk down the runway but don't puke, it's okay. You just had 10 donuts today. Without frosting. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuke 1,691 Posted June 24, 2017 Author Share Posted June 24, 2017 Thank you guys for the comments, as regards of the color of the background i used the color from the digital booklet, and i love the BTW standard edition logo (i know i'm the only one who likes it) and thats why i used it. Maybe i'm gonna took this booklet to another direction and use the manip for the other project. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
James19709 456 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 The edit on the left reminds me of the artworks Jump Jirakaweekul made. He made a series of artworks representing each song from Born This Way. A lot of his work was then used for Born This Way Ball merch. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuke 1,691 Posted June 24, 2017 Author Share Posted June 24, 2017 1 minute ago, james19709 said: The edit on the left reminds me of the artworks Jump Jirakaweekul made. He made a series of artworks representing each song from Born This Way. A lot of his work was then used for Born This Way Ball merch. Yes his work was the inspiration for the manip. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mirages 20,259 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 The song titles are a little distracting, sometimes you can barely make out the lyrics you need more contrasting text color for the lyrics or change the song titles. I love the image but again I guess I would play with the colors a little bit more so it's more pleasant to look at Just a suggestion I'm the bitch that's fragile Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
James19709 456 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 Oh P.S. That's definitely a compliment, his work was/is excellent. Spoiler Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red 97,480 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 That ugly font from the standard cover needs to go, the rest is flawless If you see me posting like crazy, I'm either bored or procrastinating. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
James19709 456 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 2 minutes ago, Nuke said: Yes his work was the inspiration for the manip. Ahhh okay Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panchecco 17,496 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 so cool! I would change the font underneth the text, maybe something that hasn't shadows and lights in like this metallic font but I think the born this way booklet it already perfect as it is Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlanSambista 666 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 Remember me of a Kanye's album, i like it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decodekid 27,868 Posted June 24, 2017 Share Posted June 24, 2017 Despite what they've told you, I think is great the way it is, i really like it Long Live Gretchen Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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