Alex C 254 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 PLEASE LISTEN, READ & HELP: Re-ordering ARTPOP's songs' structures. I have already started the experiment with VENUS, but we can make it better, and even expand our experiment to other songs, too. I guarantee it worths it !!! My computer was stolen, so I cannot produce quality remixes in this old Laptop I own... However, I actually MADE a rough (VERY rough remix-reordering of VENUS, and an a--lysis will follow to understand even better what I mean) Please read the a--lysis first, but if you want to listen to the VENUS result firstly (very LQ just to get the idea), here is the link to download the rough demo: http://picosong.com/CPeh The remixes will NOT need the stems of the songs. Just the simple, plain ol'e .mp3 file, because we will simply RE-ARRANGE parts of the song. We will just change the order things come and go. Bear with me. As a singer/songwriter I came up with an idea (after listening to ARTPOP the album, for, like a million times), which is the following: Some songs need a new "order" of the choruses, pre-choruses, verses, etc. For example, a chorus might be more catchy and serve better as a verse, and in the same song, the bridge can serve better as the chorus, etc etc.... ACTUAL PAST example: The radio edit of Heavy Metal Lover, had the bridge "i could be your girl.." as a post-chorus, all the times, and that made the song 1000 times better. I even replaced this version on my album. But let's get down to business and get SPECIFIC now: PROJECT "Re-arrange VENUS so that VENUS can be a rad-er, awesome-er song" With a couple of re-arrangements, VENUS can be Bad Romance 3.0 or Judas 2.0. OLD INTRO: 1. [instrumental]. ---> We just delete it. NEW INTRO: 1. ACAPELLA -----> "Oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh / wonder if this could be love" 2. WITH BUILDING MUSIC ------> "Goddess of love / wonder if this could be love" PRE-VERSE: along the lines of "Rah-rah-ra-ra, romah, romama...†from BR “Neptune / Go / Now serve Pluto / Saturn Jupiter / Mercury, Venus - uh ha!†and we go with VERSE 1: Rocket #9 take off to the planet (To the planet) Venus Aphrodite lady seashell bikini (Garden panty) Venus Let's blast off to a new dimension (In your bedroom) Venus Aphrodite lady seashell bikini (Get with me) Venus here we SKIP the pre-choruses "I can't help the way I'm feeling" & "take me to your planet" and save them for a later BRIDGE and POST BRIDGE. NOW THE CHORUS: straight to chorus, but the SECOND, fuller chorus: “When you touch me I die Just a little inside I wonder if this could be love, this could be love Cuz you’re out of this world Galaxy, space and time I wonder if this could be love This could be lov-OH-OH-OH-OH-OH wonder if this could be love / this could be love Goddess of Love / wonder if this could be love Venus POST-CHORUS: along the lines of "Rah-rah-ra-ra, romah, romama...†1.“Uranus! Don’t you know my ass is famous? 2. Mars Now serve for the gods 3. Earth, serve for the stars!" VERSE 2: Have an oyster, baby It’s Aphrod-isy Act sleazy Venus Worship to the land A girl from the planet (to the planet) Venus STRAIGHT TO CHORUS the SECOND, fuller chorus again: “When you touch me I die Just a little inside I wonder if this could be love, this could be love Cuz you’re out of this world Galaxy, space and time I wonder if this could be love This could be lov-OH-OH-OH-OH-OH wonder if this could be love / this could be love Goddess of Love / wonder if this could be love Venus NEW BRIDGE: I can’t help the way I’m feeling Goddess of love please take me to your leader I can’t help I keep on dancin' Goddess of Love! Goddess of Love! Take me to your planet (to the planet) Take me to your planet (to the planet) Take me to your leader (to the planet) Your leader, Your leader (to the planet) Take me to your planet (to the planet) Take me to your planet (to the planet) Take me to your Venus (to the planet) Your Venus, Your Venus (to the planet) NEW BRIDGE 2: [The instrumental that the original song has in its start] aaaaaaand: CHORUS: “When you touch me I die Just a little inside I wonder if this could be love, this could be love Cuz you’re out of this world Galaxy, space and time I wonder if this could be love This could be lov-OH-OH-OH-OH-OH wonder if this could be love / this could be love Goddess of Love / wonder if this could be love Venus ENDING BRIDGE 1: I can’t help the way I’m feeling Goddess of love please take me to your leader I can’t help I keep on dancin' Goddess of Love! Goddess of Love! ENDING BRIDGE 2: [The instrumental that the original song has in its start] Please give it a try AND listen to it: The link, again, is here: http://picosong.com/CPeh I am thirsty for opinions about the experiment (the theory of the experiment not the results. I know it is Low Quality and messy. I want feedback on the IDEA) Perform Living Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hughdancy 282 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 Slaynus was perfect the way it was though but cool idea :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zsolti 2,688 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 too messy,sorry,If it was released like this I would not even listen to it Please correct me if I make any grammar mistakes, I want to master English as much as possible. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex C 254 Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 too messy,sorry,If it was released like this I would not even listen to it I know it's messy, I made it in 10 minutes. I mean the new structure of the song, which gives BR teas. Perform Living Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teri Hatcher 2,053 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 By the time you reach the end of this sentence, it'll be too late to realize I just wasted your time with a pointless sig. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zsolti 2,688 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I know it's messy, I made it in 10 minutes. I mean the new structure of the song, which gives BR teas. Yeah the structure. It just doesnt sound right. I like the instrumental outro though. Please correct me if I make any grammar mistakes, I want to master English as much as possible. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex C 254 Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 Yeah the structure. It just doesnt sound right. I like the instrumental outro though. My idea came because MANY monsters complained about the structure of VENUS, claiming that with a few changes (and the elimination of 2 huge pre-choruses) the song would smash. That's why I try and re-order it. Give it a second try. With imagination, forget the LQ, and try to imagine that you are listening to it for the first time. Tbh, the first time I listened to Venus *was* very awkward due to structure, but it became my favorite song. How original. Any suggestions/constructive criticism? Perform Living Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElfyAss 0 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I kinda like it more than the original tbh Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex C 254 Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 I kinda like it more than the original tbh Thank you very much! I appreciate it! Perform Living Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spooky 501 Posted April 28, 2014 Share Posted April 28, 2014 I love the concept. I can't wait to see/hear more. :) like a ghost, i vanish into you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex C 254 Posted April 28, 2014 Author Share Posted April 28, 2014 I love the concept. I can't wait to see/hear more. :) I also love the concept, but I think it must be a collective effort. My laptop is old -as you prolly listened from the link-. We can gather all the audio remixers, and change Gaga's songs not in-a-remix-way but in an improvment way and more powerful. For the experts, even melody changes. But this needs to be kinda sticky and/or to be heard accross this community (the idea, not my remix of course) Perform Living Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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