moonpig8400 110 Posted September 1, 2022 Share Posted September 1, 2022 hey all my babes I love posting my stuff here as you all have such useful feedback and sometimes genuine excitement !! here's my latest -- WILD AT HEART Would love to hear your thoughts and feedback.... and also any interpretations on the song !! Lyrics: “Unruly dandelion” — always called me Couldn’t live in soul confinement Vowed to be free But there you are, calling me Chains of love, threatening Still I rush in for the thrill Fool you with my fair face Watch out for my bright spark Wild at heart, wild at heart And your hands on my waist Summons the storm above Wild at heart, wild at heart I might not look like much outside But I think you like my wild side Oh come on see what life’s about now Some call love kind I call it wild Feel it on your bare skin Blame it all the wind Ask a fish to climb a tree Never succeed Give me the breadth of the sea I’ll swim easy Can’t you see, it’s no life for me? It’s in my blood, and my body Now you enticed, coming to life Bound up with good, it’s our dark side Flickering In the heat of the night Craving animal dark Wild at heart, wild at heart A face of social grace Underneath the facade Wild at heart, wild at heart Oh baby heaven tastes of this Unleash it with one deadly kiss Oh come on see what life’s about now Some call love kind I call it wild Oh can’t you see it’s in your very humanity You’re no match for the flood But somehow you hold back and resist I go back to the storm to be free Now the storm’s not the same In my heart you’ve placed a stake I’ll try be good this time Just remember that I’m Wild at heart, wild at heart And though the lion’s tamed Watch out a part remains Wild at heart, wild at heart You drive me crazy all the time Oh baby I go out my mind You drive me…. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillaume Hamon 5,892 Posted September 1, 2022 Share Posted September 1, 2022 2 hotties. Love the symbol of the rose dragged by a chain, it's very efficient! The more I listen to it the more I like it. Adore your low voice. I personally feel like the mix with the high voice make both "eat each other" with such a contrast in tonalities. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
moonpig8400 110 Posted September 2, 2022 Author Share Posted September 2, 2022 18 hours ago, Guillaume Hamon said: 2 hotties. Love the symbol of the rose dragged by a chain, it's very efficient! The more I listen to it the more I like it. Adore your low voice. I personally feel like the mix with the high voice make both "eat each other" with such a contrast in tonalities. oh thanks you so much Guillaume! The rose dragged by the chain we did not plan it was so spur of the moment -- I just loved seeing the chain dragged across the sand so then was like omg I wanna see the ROSE dragged by the chain -- perfectly symbolising the wild animal nature shackled by my domesticator !!!! Glad it grows on u even more listening ! <3 And that you enjoy my voice ahaha ! Ooooh interesting eat each other in a good way or a way that makes it a bit muffled and hard to hear ??? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guillaume Hamon 5,892 Posted September 2, 2022 Share Posted September 2, 2022 6 hours ago, moonpig8400 said: oh thanks you so much Guillaume! The rose dragged by the chain we did not plan it was so spur of the moment -- I just loved seeing the chain dragged across the sand so then was like omg I wanna see the ROSE dragged by the chain -- perfectly symbolising the wild animal nature shackled by my domesticator !!!! Glad it grows on u even more listening ! <3 And that you enjoy my voice ahaha ! Ooooh interesting eat each other in a good way or a way that makes it a bit muffled and hard to hear ??? You're welcome! Yes it's an happy experiment. Your voice is great, we need more very low male voices!!! I would say a bit muffled. Maybe a third voice in the middle to harmonize it would make it more complementary or giving more volume to one so the other becomes more of a background to go with the lead one? I think mixing a high voice with a low one often works but here the tonality difference is so wild it kinda cancel each other imo so maybe just closer tonalities ? Now it's just my 2 cents, maybe others would love it about the song. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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