MANiCURE 6 10,195 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 Hey ! Just wanted to have some feedbacks on my possible entry for the Adobe ROM Poster Design ! ^^ Tell me everything ! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
raragaga 8,111 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 can't see it. use https://postimages.org/ xoxo Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
EtherealDreams 475 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 A biiit too busy for me but overall looks great Life imitates art. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MANiCURE 6 10,195 Posted August 26, 2020 Author Share Posted August 26, 2020 4 minutes ago, raragaga said: can't see it. use https://postimages.org/ Is it good now ? ^^ 5 minutes ago, EtherealDreams said: A biiit too busy for me but overall looks great Yeah I know... But I wanted a lot of details ! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freud 5,417 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 It looks really good! But after the winenrs of the last contest I'm not sure, what they want to see Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stone S 1,133 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 There’s definitely too much going on. I’m not a big fan of the font you used for the names. Maybe change the yellow greenish glow around her body to blue or purple Welcome to Industria Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyMetalLover 16 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 Hi. So, judging this work alone: good color palate, love the neon effect, yellow glow is interesting, and the composition is good (the background text is a good size.) Spoiler I think you could: darken the background text some, soften the color/background behind the neon text, choose a different typeface for the neon artist names (it's too insignificant now - it should stand out more/be less script-y,) make your signature less distracting (or get rid of it altogether - it's really messing up the flow,) make the sine in the bottom left stand out more - changing the color would be smart, make LG6 more prominent - it's lost, play with the yellow highlight - it's too random right now, and put a soft drop shadow behind ROM in the corner. Good start! i don't remember ARTPOP Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MANiCURE 6 10,195 Posted August 26, 2020 Author Share Posted August 26, 2020 50 minutes ago, HeavyMetalLover said: Hi. So, judging this work alone: good color palate, love the neon effect, yellow glow is interesting, and the composition is good (the background text is a good size.) Hide contents I think you could: darken the background text some, soften the color/background behind the neon text, choose a different typeface for the neon artist names (it's too insignificant now - it should stand out more/be less script-y,) make your signature less distracting (or get rid of it altogether - it's really messing up the flow,) make the sine in the bottom left stand out more - changing the color would be smart, make LG6 more prominent - it's lost, play with the yellow highlight - it's too random right now, and put a soft drop shadow behind ROM in the corner. Good start! Thanks ! What do you think about this version ? ;-) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fresco 1,688 Posted August 26, 2020 Share Posted August 26, 2020 The spotlight on her vagina just seems a bit much. I'm not thrilled with the lighting contrast on Gaga. Ariana is where? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MANiCURE 6 10,195 Posted August 27, 2020 Author Share Posted August 27, 2020 5 minutes ago, Fresco said: The spotlight on her vagina just seems a bit much. Is wasn't on purpose but I decided to keep it cause why not haha Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavyMetalLover 16 Posted August 27, 2020 Share Posted August 27, 2020 49 minutes ago, MANiCURE 6 said: Thanks ! What do you think about this version ? ;-) Wow! It's much more striking and easier to read. I think it's great - maybe her face should be a little lighter. It's a bit too shadowy now, and should be a main area of focus. i don't remember ARTPOP Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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