My Entry For Adobe ROM Poster !

[MANiCURE 6 9,925]

Hey ! Just wanted to have some feedbacks on my possible entry for the Adobe ROM Poster Design ! ^^

      

Tell me everything ! 

[raragaga 8,069]

can't see it.

use  https://postimages.org/

[EtherealDreams 475]

A biiit too busy for me but overall looks great 

[MANiCURE 6 9,925]

4 minutes ago, raragaga said:

can't see it.

use  https://postimages.org/

Is it good now ? ^^

 

5 minutes ago, EtherealDreams said:

A biiit too busy for me but overall looks great 

Yeah I know... But I wanted a lot of details !

[Sandrology 4,883]

It looks really good!

But after the winenrs of the last contest I'm not sure, what they want to see

[Stone S 1,133]

There’s definitely too much going on. I’m not a big fan of the font you used for the names. Maybe change the yellow greenish glow around her body to blue or purple

[HeavyMetalLover 16]

Hi. So, judging this work alone: good color palate, love the neon effect, yellow glow is interesting, and the composition is good (the background text is a good size.)

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I think you could: darken the background text some, soften the color/background behind the neon text, choose a different typeface for the neon artist names (it's too insignificant now - it should stand out more/be less script-y,) make your signature less distracting (or get rid of it altogether - it's really messing up the flow,) make the sine in the bottom left stand out more - changing the color would be smart, make LG6 more prominent - it's lost, play with the yellow highlight - it's too random right now, and put a soft drop shadow behind ROM in the corner. Good start!

 

[MANiCURE 6 9,925]

50 minutes ago, HeavyMetalLover said:

Hi. So, judging this work alone: good color palate, love the neon effect, yellow glow is interesting, and the composition is good (the background text is a good size.)

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I think you could: darken the background text some, soften the color/background behind the neon text, choose a different typeface for the neon artist names (it's too insignificant now - it should stand out more/be less script-y,) make your signature less distracting (or get rid of it altogether - it's really messing up the flow,) make the sine in the bottom left stand out more - changing the color would be smart, make LG6 more prominent - it's lost, play with the yellow highlight - it's too random right now, and put a soft drop shadow behind ROM in the corner. Good start!

 

Thanks !

What do you think about this version ? ;-)

[Fresco 1,688]

The spotlight on her vagina just seems a bit much. I'm not thrilled with the lighting contrast on Gaga. Ariana is where?

[MANiCURE 6 9,925]

5 minutes ago, Fresco said:

The spotlight on her vagina just seems a bit much.

Is wasn't on purpose but I decided to keep it cause why not haha

[HeavyMetalLover 16]

49 minutes ago, MANiCURE 6 said:

Thanks !

What do you think about this version ? ;-)

Wow! It's much more striking and easier to read. I think it's great - maybe her face should be a little lighter. It's a bit too shadowy now, and should be a main area of focus.