David Ward 9,349 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Please go easy on me! I was living a foster home and limited to a lot technology, but I recorded my vocals through my iPhone 4 back in 2011 when I was 16. I feel like I sounds horrible, but maybe I'm being self conscious. Please keep in my that I was 16 at the time, and recorded the vocals via the Voice Memo app and on iPhone. I rushed when I mixed and mastered, so it took me an hour tbh I would love to hear constructive criticism from my GGD daily P.S. Just keep in my that I cringe at my voice I've never taken vocal lessons but my 3rd grade music teacher singled me out and gave me a card for a vocal instructor in the city, but I was 7 lmao. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimisaMonster 31,073 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Stream my new single, 💜"Heartbeat"💜, on Spotify! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevana229 1,881 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Great job! but I would change the key to something higher for your voice Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SLAG 7 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Too much vocal effects. Can barely hear the vocals. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Ward 9,349 Posted July 24, 2020 Author Share Posted July 24, 2020 6 hours ago, stevana229 said: Great job! but I would change the key to something higher for your voice 6 hours ago, darkpaw said: Too much vocal effects. Can barely hear the vocals. I wish I could re-edit it, but it was from 2011 and I have no access to the stems of mix, I want to do Space Oddity next! It's been 10 years since this cover and I think I can manage it. (hopefully ) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KarmaPolice 4,731 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 Yeah, key is way too low for your voice and you messed up the tempo (the vocals comes too early compared to the base) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Ward 9,349 Posted July 24, 2020 Author Share Posted July 24, 2020 59 minutes ago, KarmaPolice said: Yeah, key is way too low for your voice and you messed up the tempo (the vocals comes too early compared to the base) Thank you! I was 16 and clearly had no what I was doing because I was recoridng from an old iphone. I had no mixing experience either. I appreciate your constructive criticism Is there anything positive you feel the need to add? If not, I understand. I'm cringing af. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karen Smith 10,026 Posted July 24, 2020 Share Posted July 24, 2020 15 hours ago, David Ward said: Please go easy on me! I was living a foster home and limited to a lot technology, but I recorded my vocals through my iPhone 4 back in 2011 when I was 16. I feel like I sounds horrible, but maybe I'm being self conscious. Please keep in my that I was 16 at the time, and recorded the vocals via the Voice Memo app and on iPhone. I rushed when I mixed and mastered, so it took me an hour tbh I would love to hear constructive criticism from my GGD daily P.S. Just keep in my that I cringe at my voice I've never taken vocal lessons but my 3rd grade music teacher singled me out and gave me a card for a vocal instructor in the city, but I was 7 lmao. So many vocal effects, maybe you're to shy to show your voice just without any effects, but I do like it anyway! I think it's very good just keep going and I'm sure you're gonna be better and better Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
David Ward 9,349 Posted July 24, 2020 Author Share Posted July 24, 2020 3 hours ago, Little99 said: So many vocal effects, maybe you're to shy to show your voice just without any effects, but I do like it anyway! I think it's very good just keep going and I'm sure you're gonna be better and better Thank you so much! This was almost 10 years ago so my voice has gotten better. I'm not that great at mixing so that probably explains why Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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