youandi 2,110 Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 I feel like the only way this could work without ruining the magic of the final chorus/outro would be to extend the intro a little bit, either with the piano house chords or that slowed down muffled 'I hear the thunder' from that fan made teaser. And then if you really wanted to push it, potentially the second chorus could be done the same as the last with the more upbeat 'I'd rather be dry'. Just leave that amazing 'I hear the thunder coming down' till the end because its the catharsis the song needs I think Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHALLOW 14,833 Posted May 22, 2020 Author Share Posted May 22, 2020 21 minutes ago, youandi said: I feel like the only way this could work without ruining the magic of the final chorus/outro would be to extend the intro a little bit, either with the piano house chords or that slowed down muffled 'I hear the thunder' from that fan made teaser. And then if you really wanted to push it, potentially the second chorus could be done the same as the last with the more upbeat 'I'd rather be dry'. Just leave that amazing 'I hear the thunder coming down' till the end because its the catharsis the song needs I think Honestly even the whoo ooh oohs were a really nice touch that would've made the song more interesting imo. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MelbHawker 6,282 Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 I like this version better because that final chorus is EVERYTHING & Id rather hear it 3 times than once. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhiskeyLikeMisery 418 Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 I don't really like this I think it's too repetitive now. I guess it would be better if we had the stems. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHALLOW 14,833 Posted May 22, 2020 Author Share Posted May 22, 2020 26 minutes ago, WhiskeyLikeMisery said: I don't really like this I think it's too repetitive now. I guess it would be better if we had the stems. I don't think this is perfect but it's still better for me. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archduchess 2 Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 Send it to Haus of Gaga NOW they can replace the song yet Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GagaUnderYou 4,915 Posted May 22, 2020 Share Posted May 22, 2020 I wish Ariana's "I hear the thunder verse" was through out the entire song. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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