PoetsTryinWrite 1,262 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 Here it is. My first song. The vocal isn’t perfect but it’s only a demo. I wanted you guys to be the first to hear it. Defend Your Humanity. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PartySick 148,163 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 Wait wtf. I'm genuinely impressed by the amount of talent we have on this site Tell me this is on Spotify so I can add it to my main playlist I'm just like 🧍♂️ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PoetsTryinWrite 1,262 Posted February 16, 2020 Author Share Posted February 16, 2020 1 minute ago, PartySick said: Wait wtf. I'm genuinely impressed by the amount of talent we have on this site Tell me this is on Spotify so I can add it to my main playlist Really? You like it? Omg. I’ve been sitting here shaking with fear ever since I pressed upload. Defend Your Humanity. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mean Winchester 410 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 OH MY GOD!!!! The songwriting!! Keep doing this....you will go far. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Hybrid 10,959 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 It’s great, I’d turn down the reverb a bit tough, it’s kind of disturbing, and personally I don’t like the autotune but that’s just me No family’s safe when I sashay Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PoetsTryinWrite 1,262 Posted February 16, 2020 Author Share Posted February 16, 2020 Just now, A Hybrid said: It’s great, I’d turn down the reverb a bit tough, it’s kind of disturbing, and personally I don’t like the autotune but that’s just me Thanks for the feedback. There actually Isn’t any autotune. But I agree the vocal is a bit loud. Defend Your Humanity. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Original Diva 4,945 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 Okay I'm only 20 seconds in but what the actual f*ck. I love your voice!! Wow!! Okay now Imma keep listening haha. Is this on spotify? excuse me no Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dit 46,158 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 girl this is ICONIC. Did you make the instrumentation? and what program do you use? This is so damn good and I love that Asian-esque instrumentation in the beginning of the song. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheFriend 1,917 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 ^what everyone said And Who did the artwork?!?!!? It's also good. Talent is winning. Edit: The background instruments around 2:35-2:40 were a bit playing at the same together kind of mess. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daylight Jokers 14,958 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 I love the songwriting so much! It's so creative. The chorus also actually slaps. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa 16,263 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 Wow i listen throughout with interest. The intro is amazing. Great writting Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight on Water 13,773 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 holy ****ing ****. i thought the intro instrumentals were weird, but the vocal is god damn amazing. you did ****ing great, i'm telling you she/her Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
little legend 0 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 It's so good And thank you for writing a song about our fanbase Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PoetsTryinWrite 1,262 Posted February 16, 2020 Author Share Posted February 16, 2020 3 hours ago, Original Diva said: Okay I'm only 20 seconds in but what the actual f*ck. I love your voice!! Wow!! Okay now Imma keep listening haha. Is this on spotify? Thank you so much. Nope, I am only learning how to release music at the moment. I had planned on releasing it on Soundcloud first but I produced the track on GarageBand using an iPhone. I’ll try to get it on Spotify for you 3 hours ago, dit said: girl this is ICONIC. Did you make the instrumentation? and what program do you use? This is so damn good and I love that Asian-esque instrumentation in the beginning of the song. Thank you! I’ve been writing an album for months with just me and the piano. I had planned to go into a studio in August but I became impatient and started messing with GarageBand. My thirteen year old sister is the one to thank for the hook! I produced everything else. 3 hours ago, TheFriend said: ^what everyone said And Who did the artwork?!?!!? It's also good. Talent is winning. Edit: The background instruments around 2:35-2:40 were a bit playing at the same together kind of mess. Thank you the artwork is actually a tattoo. Yeah, it’s certainly not polished or ready yet. I just got too excited and wanted to share it with you guys lol. 3 hours ago, LGs LM said: I love the songwriting so much! It's so creative. The chorus also actually slaps. You’re a diamond 💎 1 hour ago, Cookies said: holy ****ing ****. i thought the intro instrumentals were weird, but the vocal is god damn amazing. you did ****ing great, i'm telling you Weird is my thing lol. Thank you! 48 minutes ago, little legend said: It's so good And thank you for writing a song about our fanbase Hahaha I love this fanbase. The song is actually about alcoholism. I’m using the clown as a metaphor for the performing alcoholic but it’s certainly open to interpretation. Defend Your Humanity. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
jprince99x 3,547 Posted February 16, 2020 Share Posted February 16, 2020 I love it. Try to get the vocals into more of your chest voice instead of mix voice until the chorus, then belt. I think the vocals would sound stronger without the delay and just dry. The instrumentation is not large enough to suffice that much delay IMO Let’s have some fun this beat is Sapokanikan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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