My new song please give opinions

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

here it is please give your opinion

[Ladey Gaygay 9,321]

I like it, however i would totes get a better mic so you sound less sick, and find a sound that really suits you so it doesnt sound off

BUT

Heres to hoping one day you can make THAT bop

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

5 minutes ago, GlitterandTeeth said:

I like it, however i would totes get a better mic so you sound less sick, and find a sound that really suits you so it doesnt sound off

BUT

Heres to hoping one day you can make THAT bop

Ty  appreciate the feedback, I do have a better mic but I made this phone when I was away from using it but I will totally take on your feedback and Tysm.

[AMENiCURE 9,370]

i loved the instrumental tbh, its perfect

the problems is the vocals. while the melodies DO MATCH, you do need some tweaking like reverb and all

gl with ur career tho xoxo

 

[Flu Symptom 2,541]

The backing vocals at 3:26 should be used more often in the song love that

[Cloudbusting 1,548]

The beat is really good and interesting the only thing is that the vocals seem like they are jumping from the track... idk if you understand like they seem as if they are not that close to the rhythm. Sometimes the vocals blend a little more but the beginning really stood out. Good luckk 

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

5 minutes ago, fabskt said:

The beat is really good and interesting the only thing is that the vocals seem like they are jumping from the track... idk if you understand like they seem as if they are not that close to the rhythm. Sometimes the vocals blend a little more but the beginning really stood out. Good luckk 

I understand you and Tysm for the nice reply I appreciate it  and ty again

12 minutes ago, Flu Symptom said:

The backing vocals at 3:26 should be used more often in the song love that

Tysm

[Loopy 1,089]

I actually enjoyed this  It's actually different and refreshing. I wish I could pull half of that myself, I have zero talent when it comes to remotely sing anything  

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

1 minute ago, Loopy said:

I actually enjoyed this  It's actually different and refreshing. I wish I could pull half of that myself, I have zero talent when it comes to remotely sing anything  

Tysm means a lot for u to say that ♥️ <3 and if you train yourself to sing you will become better. 

[A Hybrid 10,959]

I think it’s great! I notice that you’re trying to make it have a big trap influence, but the song needs more instruments. I like the color of your voice, it’s distinct (idk how it’d sound live but here it’s good) but you need backing vocals not by yourself, put them everywhere.

also just a personal opinion but I feel like this song is begging for some energetic backing shouts like in Christina Aguilera’s Accelerate.

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

14 minutes ago, A Hybrid said:

I think it’s great! I notice that you’re trying to make it have a big trap influence, but the song needs more instruments. I like the color of your voice, it’s distinct (idk how it’d sound live but here it’s good) but you need backing vocals not by yourself, put them everywhere.

also just a personal opinion but I feel like this song is begging for some energetic backing shouts like in Christina Aguilera’s Accelerate.

Tysm I appreciate your view, my creativite process, I always go into a song saying I’m gonna add backing vocals and I always freaking forget or can’t think of where to put them etc and it bugs me to the lordsssssss

but ty for this and I appreciate you and everyone taking the time to listen 

[GAGASEXUAL 2,841]

First of all,

I love your style.

but...

As a producer i have to tell you the things to improve so you can make better and bigger songs.

1- The vocals are too raw you should use some effects on it. 

2- You used loops so technically you didn’t mix it completely.

3- As i hear, you didn’t master your song and it decreases the quality of the song.

Keep making music you have the light 🙏🏻

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

Just now, GAGASEXUAL said:

First of all,

I love your style.

but...

As a producer i have to tell you the things to improve so you can make better and bigger songs.

1- The vocals are too raw you should use some effects on it. 

2- You used loops so technically you didn’t mix it completely.

3- As i hear, you didn’t master your song and it decreases the quality of the song.

Keep making music you have the light 🙏🏻

Tysm, I think I am slowly improving I uploaded a song called In My World (it’s on the same channel) it has effects and I programmed the loops myself by like making the rhythm and melody myself rather then pre made loops, and as for mastering I need to do that but like I can never find places that do it well for free or anything but ty I will hopefully keep making music.

[Lucas 20,606]

I listened to it 10 minutes ago and the chorus is stuck in my head, so I came back here just to tell you it's pretty catchy. Can't give you any advice about the song but as many people mentionned the vocals sound a bit too raw. Keep working on music because this is great! 

[ImpossiblePrincess 3,732]

1 minute ago, GagaInTheZone said:

I listened to it 10 minutes ago and the chorus is stuck in my head, so I came back here just to tell you it's pretty catchy. Can't give you any advice about the song but as many people mentionned the vocals sound a bit too raw. Keep working on music because this is great! 

Awe Tysm that means a lot and I’m so happy it’s catchy it stuck in my head whilst making it so ty! I really regret not adding any effects on the lead vocals