Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 Hey fellow GGDsters, today I uploaded the first song off my second project. The song is called Off My Head, and the EP will be called Songs About You, and all the songs will make a complete story. Hope you like it. https://andreusongs.blogspot.com/2019/01/get-it-off-my-head.html (in case you want the lyrics) EDIT: I didnt mention it because I think it's obvious but yeah, I've written and produced this myself (and it shows sksk) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
corvus albus 38,031 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 43 minutes ago, Andreu said: first tong off my second project I don't know what this is Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Didymus 34,380 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 Nice melodies, esp. in the chorus, I could see that be a real hit tbh if it was recorded by some up and coming star. Some problems in the flow of the lyrics though. "when I said I didn't care about you anymore" that sounds really awkward. But whatever, it's catchy, I might re-listen a couple of times and keep 'em coming Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 10 minutes ago, corvus albus said: I don't know what this is fixedT Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NNES 5,868 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 I will listen to this soon Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 3 minutes ago, Didymus said: Nice melodies, esp. in the chorus, I could see that be a real hit tbh if it was recorded by some up and coming star. Some problems in the flow of the lyrics though. "when I said I didn't care about you anymore" that sounds really awkward. But whatever, it's catchy, I might re-listen a couple of times and keep 'em coming First of all, thank you for taking the time to listen to my song and writing a review. Maybe you're right and the flow in the chorus it's too forced, and I will definitely keep an eye on making the lyrics in my next tracks in a more natural way. Because yeah it's forced at some points, so thanks for helping me realising that. Glad tosee you liked it and I hope you're maybe interested in my other music! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 15 minutes ago, NNES said: I will listen to this soon don't worry you'll have it spammed on my IG so you don't forget hehe Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sneaky Oliver 22,221 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 Andreu you have a really good voice!! if I’m allowed to suggest something, for the upcoming songs, try smooth high pitch vocals instead of the heavy low pitch “oooh” cause your voice is so soft! But im really impressed! The song is amazing! Congrats you are very talented Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 13 minutes ago, Sneaky Oliver said: Andreu you have a really good voice!! if I’m allowed to suggest something, for the upcoming songs, try smooth high pitch vocals instead of the heavy low pitch “oooh” cause your voice is so soft! But im really impressed! The song is amazing! Congrats you are very talented thank you for your kind words and the suggestion. Regardless of which register I like the most, I feel more confident in my lower one tbh Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 I love the melody and the concept etc. But I think there's some wrong notes in the chords of the guitar ? And I'd like the drop to be more percussive (why didn't you put a snare?) maybe with synths or idk but that's matter of taste. Good work ! EDIT: I have to add that the strength of the song is definitely the melody of the vocals Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 16 minutes ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: But I think there's some wrong notes in the chords of the guitar ? well, definitely not wrong notes But it sounds a little dirty, so maybe it's that. Tbh and sadly, the most I can do with my mic 16 minutes ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: why didn't you put a snare? because I thought of it as a melodical segment not necessarily a drop and I wanted to have that contrast idk kinda like on Selena's Back To You thanks for the feedback Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zombiecat 16,921 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 Avicii teas and i love it do the dead cats Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stef 61,598 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 Me listening to this Signature loading… 👹🖤 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miracle 14,068 Posted January 28, 2019 Share Posted January 28, 2019 The melody is nice. Production and voice (for the most part, there's some really cute notes tho) not so much. Also, it's not necessary to sing in English, especially if you don't dominate the pronunciation. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andreu 37,216 Posted January 28, 2019 Author Share Posted January 28, 2019 8 minutes ago, Stef said: Me listening to this Glad to see you liked it 11 minutes ago, Unbeweavable said: Avicii teas and i love it Thanks 4 minutes ago, Miracle said: The melody is nice. Production and voice (for the most part, there's some really cute notes tho) not so much. Also, it's not necessary to sing in English, especially if you don't dominate the pronunciation. thanks for your feedback regarding the language, I write and sing in both english and catalan. I know it's not necessary (: b Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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