DitaDolla 11,006 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 I re-built shallow's structure to make more sense and I think it would be better like that (even tho the current version is amazing) Take a look: Verse 1 (Bradley Cooper) Tell me somethin' girl Are you happy in this modern world? Or do you need more? Is there somethin' else you're searchin' for? Pre-Chorus (Bradley) I'm falling In all the good times I find myself longin' for change And in the bad times I fear myself Chorus (Bradley) I'm off the deep end, watch as I dive in I'll never meet the ground Crash through the surface, where they can't hurt us We're far from the shallow now Verse 2 (Lady Gaga) Tell me something boy Aren't you tired tryin' to fill that void? Or do you need more? Ain't it hard keeping it so hardcore? Pre-Chorus (Lady Gaga) I'm falling In all the good times I find myself longing for change And in the bad times I fear myself Chorus (Lady Gaga) I'm off the deep end, watch as I dive in I'll never meet the ground Crash through the surface, where they can't hurt us We're far from the shallow now *Guitar playing for a couple seconds* Bridge (Lady Gaga) Wooaaaah Woaaaaaaaaaaah Chorus (Lady Gaga & Bradley) I'm off the deep end, watch as I dive in I'll never meet the ground Crash through the surface, where they can't hurt us We're far from the shallow now Post-Chorus (Lady Gaga & Bradley Cooper) In the shallow, shallow In the shallow, shallow In the shallow, shallow We're far from the shallow now Hope u like it She is winning again…. somehow she always stays here. I can’t stand it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
iAstroLeo 14,434 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 Basically, the normal structure but yes I approve It's a matter of time some monster makes it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DitaDolla 11,006 Posted September 28, 2018 Author Share Posted September 28, 2018 2 minutes ago, iAstroLeo said: Basically, the normal structure but yes I approve It's a matter of time some monster makes it I mean this structure makes more sense to me idk how to explain She is winning again…. somehow she always stays here. I can’t stand it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Didymus 34,380 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 26 minutes ago, NathanRajz said: I mean this structure makes more sense to me idk how to explain I do. It's the structure 90% of pop songs are written in. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
crisTEAne 21,059 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 the pop formula was reborn. if you hurt taylor swift, i'll hurt you back Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DSK 611 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 I don't like that post chorus, tbh. It could be substituted for something else, or just go and let the chorus repeat again Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
U-GO-BOY 1,608 Posted September 28, 2018 Share Posted September 28, 2018 you can structure the song like this to make it the arrangement more Pop music: Verse (Gaga) - 1st Chorus without Drums - Verse (Bradley) - 1st Chorus again - Bridge - 2nd Chor the reason to put Gaga's verse first is because she sings the main vocals in the chorus. It would sound weird if Gaga's vocals just came in after Bradley's verse Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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