CAPRISONGS 1,631 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 https://mattmakesmusic.bandcamp.com/track/farewell LISTEN TO THIS I HOPE YOU BOP TO IT! By Me and @Human Nature EDIT : Just to let you know we are both 15 x Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Just now, gxgaqueen said: https://mattmakesmusic.bandcamp.com/track/farewell LISTEN TO THIS I HOPE YOU BOP TO IT! By Me and @Human Nature WHOO Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
robboadam 2,226 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 EDIT: Just wanted to say, I think it’s really great you’re both making music at 15......I would’ve been too nervous to do it at that age! Keep going, keep creating - you’re not going to make Bad Romance on your first try! If you want feedback, tbh I think the song needs a bit of work. Seems very out of tune, unless that’s the effect you’re going for. Lyrically needs some tweaking, especially the ‘about to hit the chorus’ bit. It sounds like you’ve made the instrumental on GarageBand or something, and then made the song over that. Personally I think that’s the wrong strategy - try using a keyboard or something and getting the melodies and lyrics together. Then spruce it up with production. Apologies if that’s what you’ve done, it just sounds like you did the former. As I said, keep creating, keep sharing - but don’t be afraid of negative feedback! That’s how you get better - ‘marry the night’ and all that! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 1 minute ago, robboadam said: Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
CAPRISONGS 1,631 Posted August 24, 2018 Author Share Posted August 24, 2018 5 minutes ago, robboadam said: overused Gif try again Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miracle 14,068 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 my name is roxxxy andrews Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 STAY ON TOPIC pls Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
robboadam 2,226 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 3 minutes ago, Miracle said: my name is roxxxy andrews And. This. Is. My. HHHAAAUUUSSS. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Just now, robboadam said: And. This. Is. My. HHHAAAUUUSSS. 4 minutes ago, Miracle said: my name is roxxxy andrews 3 minutes ago, Human Nature said: STAY ON TOPIC pls. Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
robboadam 2,226 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Just now, Human Nature said: Read my edit then! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 14 minutes ago, robboadam said: EDIT: Just wanted to say, I think it’s really great you’re both making music at 15......I would’ve been too nervous to do it at that age! Keep going, keep creating - you’re not going to make Bad Romance on your first try! If you want feedback, tbh I think the song needs a bit of work. Seems very out of tune, unless that’s the effect you’re going for. Lyrically needs some tweaking, especially the ‘about to hit the chorus’ bit. It sounds like you’ve made the instrumental on GarageBand or something, and then made the song over that. Personally I think that’s the wrong strategy - try using a keyboard or something and getting the melodies and lyrics together. Then spruce it up with production. Apologies if that’s what you’ve done, it just sounds like you did the former. As I said, keep creating, keep sharing - but don’t be afraid of negative feedback! That’s how you get better - ‘marry the night’ and all that! well ty <3 I Agree Some Parts May Not Be Right The "It's About To Hit The Chorus" Part Is Meant To Be Kinda Funny / Loud Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RepentingSinner 2,642 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Nice first try. Its always nice seeing someone dip their toes into music. I know you're young, but if you want to be serious about this you're gonna have to put in a lot of work. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 2 minutes ago, LittleLocoCoco said: Nice first try. Its always nice seeing someone dip their toes into music. I know you're young, but if you want to be serious about this you're gonna have to put in a lot of work. We Are This Is Our First Collab So We Are Trying! We Both Have Albums But We Don't Feel Confident Showing Them Tbh Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RepentingSinner 2,642 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Just now, Human Nature said: We Are This Is Our First Collab So We Are Trying! We Both Have Albums But We Don't Feel Confident Showing Them Tbh Well, they're not hard to find. I found both of you guys stuff. Tbh a lot of that stuff is better than this. So don't hold back. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImpossiblePrincess 3,867 Posted August 24, 2018 Share Posted August 24, 2018 Just now, LittleLocoCoco said: Well, they're not hard to find. I found both of you guys stuff. Tbh a lot of that stuff is better than this. So don't hold back. well ty <3 Welcome to GagaDaily, it looks like things just got messgendary. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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