Lucifer 1,987 Posted March 6, 2018 Share Posted March 6, 2018 Hey guys! I'm working on some music at the moment. I'd love to get some feedback on this beat(?) I'm working on. I'm a amateur, so I would really appriciate it if some of you guys who have knowledge could give me some feedback. Thanks Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reid LePage 4,849 Posted March 6, 2018 Share Posted March 6, 2018 i love this however not sure about the breakbeat, the kick drum doesn't hit hard enough Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChrisGaga 315 Posted March 6, 2018 Share Posted March 6, 2018 Sounds great! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucifer 1,987 Posted March 6, 2018 Author Share Posted March 6, 2018 8 minutes ago, Hybrid Rose said: i love this however not sure about the breakbeat, the kick drum doesn't hit hard enough 8 minutes ago, ChrisGaga said: Sounds great! Thank you guys! Will try my best to make it hit harder Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mikolaj 11,635 Posted March 7, 2018 Share Posted March 7, 2018 I thought it would make for a good alarm clock until it came to the drop The beginning is very nice and I like the melody. The middle part (from 0:17 to 0:50) sounds really good and promising! Though it could use some mastering but whatever it's just a demo. I think you can make the drop harder by adding some buzz maybe? The kicks are too low and I have pretty good headphones so they were irritating, I'm sure you can work on this part more. Overall it shows that you have pretty good sense of what you're doing but not as much where you're going with it because I hear potential for three different songs here, like for example the first part feels unusually slow compared to the middle part and the last part after the beat starts feels completely different to the rest. I'm trying to give as much feedback as possible with my own little experience of amateur producer so don't take it too seriously of course Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucifer 1,987 Posted March 7, 2018 Author Share Posted March 7, 2018 6 minutes ago, ExMachina said: I thought it would make for a good alarm clock until it came to the drop The beginning is very nice and I like the melody. The middle part (from 0:17 to 0:50) sounds really good and promising! Though it could use some mastering but whatever it's just a demo. I think you can make the drop harder by adding some buzz maybe? The kicks are too low and I have pretty good headphones so they were irritating, I'm sure you can work on this part more. Overall it shows that you have pretty good sense of what you're doing but not as much where you're going with it because I hear potential for three different songs here, like for example the first part feels unusually slow compared to the middle part and the last part after the beat starts feels completely different to the rest. I'm trying to give as much feedback as possible with my own little experience of amateur producer so don't take it too seriously of course Thank you so much! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decodekid 28,263 Posted March 7, 2018 Share Posted March 7, 2018 the melody reminds a bit of Video Games by Lana which i LOVE Long Live Gretchen Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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