NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 Hey Monsters! I had this melody last night in my mind before sleeping. I recorded it quickly on my phone and today I wrote, composed and recorded the demo. I've planned to add a bridge and an outro. It's called I'm The One, I like how sound the beat and the synths even though I'm not done with it. I know the quality of the recording is really low, you have to put headphones on. I'm sorry for that and I already know I should buy a better microphone. I'd be glad if you gave me your opinion on it, any constructive advice? Spoiler don't be tough plz it's a demo and my mic is **** EDIT: I think I made a mistake posting this thread because I saw there is a second thread that is exactly the same, sorry sis Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunBuns 596 Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 I'd like a faster BPM but this is a demo and you have an idea. Develop it! www.soundcloud.com/aphrodisio Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted September 17, 2017 Author Share Posted September 17, 2017 4 minutes ago, aphrodisio said: I'd like a faster BPM but this is a demo and you have an idea. Develop it! It's currently 108BPM but I'll try to speed up to smt like 113-115 thank you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
murad 152 Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 Come thru autotune king! Britney is shaking! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted September 17, 2017 Author Share Posted September 17, 2017 7 minutes ago, murad said: Come thru autotune king! Britney is shaking! You caught me Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ada 1,665 Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 It's great! For a constructive advice, I think it would sound better if you sang in a more energetic way. I like the way you sing, but I think this song needs a little boost (specially for the chorus). Also, what are your goals? Do you plan to be a performer/producer or only one of them? I'm interested Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted September 17, 2017 Author Share Posted September 17, 2017 22 minutes ago, MrA said: It's great! For a constructive advice, I think it would sound better if you sang in a more energetic way. I like the way you sing, but I think this song needs a little boost (specially for the chorus). Also, what are your goals? Do you plan to be a performer/producer or only one of them? I'm interested Thank you, and truth be told, I dont sing that energetic because I'm scared my neighbors hear me lol But I totally agree with you. To answer your question. It would be a dream to be a performer/producer, but I know it's only a dream. It's so difficult nowadays to be noticed with all those talented artists and I'm not a son-of ... But this is my passion and I wish I could make it my job but idk... I'm currently going to high school, but nothing in connection with music EDIT: it's not even a hobby or something I do on my spare time. I have composed like 500 songs since 2012 it's totally who I am I couldn't live without it. I think my songs saved my life in many ways... (I'm writing a lot sorry but you asked ) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ada 1,665 Posted September 17, 2017 Share Posted September 17, 2017 3 hours ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: Thank you, and truth be told, I dont sing that energetic because I'm scared my neighbors hear me lol But I totally agree with you. To answer your question. It would be a dream to be a performer/producer, but I know it's only a dream. It's so difficult nowadays to be noticed with all those talented artists and I'm not a son-of ... But this is my passion and I wish I could make it my job but idk... I'm currently going to high school, but nothing in connection with music EDIT: it's not even a hobby or something I do on my spare time. I have composed like 500 songs since 2012 it's totally who I am I couldn't live without it. I think my songs saved my life in many ways... (I'm writing a lot sorry but you asked ) Omg I can totally relate. I used to sing like that because of my neighbors (I don't remember when I started to give a f*ck about it lol). Just think that you're wasting your time and it's only a matter of time until you start singing your lungs out. Also, you need to project your voice in order to improve your technique! You're crazy, you're telling me that you're in high school and you have written like 500 SONGS? That's ambition man. If you have a need so strong, keep doing it. Start making contacts before leaving high school (GGD is a good place, it's filled with artists). Don't be sorry! I'm super interested in emerging artists. I was thinking about making a thread so we could make projects together and support each other I hope to hear more from you! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted September 18, 2017 Author Share Posted September 18, 2017 8 hours ago, MrA said: Omg I can totally relate. I used to sing like that because of my neighbors (I don't remember when I started to give a f*ck about it lol). Just think that you're wasting your time and it's only a matter of time until you start singing your lungs out. Also, you need to project your voice in order to improve your technique! You're crazy, you're telling me that you're in high school and you have written like 500 SONGS? That's ambition man. If you have a need so strong, keep doing it. Start making contacts before leaving high school (GGD is a good place, it's filled with artists). Don't be sorry! I'm super interested in emerging artists. I was thinking about making a thread so we could make projects together and support each other I hope to hear more from you! You're so nice thank you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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