NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 Nobody in this world knows really who I am and I feel safe today to share it with y'all. I write songs (about pain, freedom, inequality, world, society,...) compose and sing since 2012. I do everything alone in my bedroom and that's why the quality of the recording is quite low. Gaga totally inspired me and made me wanna do this. Anyway I wanna show you what I do because my songs actually saved me when I was living hell. Today I show you my last record Ashes. It says that you shouldn't care about all the people that spit on you or even about your own demons because soon enough we’ll all look the same as ashes. No matter your name, the fame or your bank account. This demo has been written, composed and recorded in one hour, so, be tolerant please. I’m gonna share more songs later on GGD and if you enjoy it I’m thinking of making a song with y’all! That means everyone would write a sentence in comments and I’ll make a song with what you wrote. Then I'll share it just for fun. Tell me what you think about it. PEACE #musicnotthebling Edit: here's the lyrics because I heard it was not that easy to understand: Boy I think there’s no heaven for us to go Anyway there is no way for us to know I don’t care if your believes are not the same As long as you claim peace is the aim Oh what a shame to undergo and wait Don’t need no rules to know how to slay See what we became there is way too much hate It could be our last day Do not do not Ever ever Forget theres no Granted future Cause you and me And whoever There’s no there’s no Granted future We’ll all be ashes, be ashes No matter your name, you’ll be ashes **** what they say, they’ll be ashes We’ll look the same as ashes Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
heda97 2,399 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 Hi! I love your passion for music, and the beat of the song is good as well. Would you like constructive feedback? Im á Katycat on Fridays #tgif Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted August 25, 2017 Author Share Posted August 25, 2017 Just now, heda97 said: Hi! I love your passion for music, and the beat of the song is good as well. Would you like constructive feedback? of course Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DONOVAN4wer 13 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 I do sis Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
heda97 2,399 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 3 minutes ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: of course So, I went and looked at the rest of your soundcloud. Your beats and composition of the music is nice, however maybe try a song with less effects on your voice, as the autotune makes the lyrics a bit hard to hear. Maybe try out a song where your voice shines through instead of blending into the instrumental like it has now. Im á Katycat on Fridays #tgif Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted August 25, 2017 Author Share Posted August 25, 2017 Just now, heda97 said: So, I went and looked at the rest of your soundcloud. Your beats and composition of the music is nice, however maybe try a song with less effects on your voice, as the autotune makes the lyrics a bit hard to hear. Maybe try out a song where your voice shines through instead of becoming another instrument like it has now. I know that... I try to mix it as I can with the low quality of the recording and it's not that good. Maybe I should get a good microphone. Thank you for your time and your advice Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverViennese 1,164 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 I love this! Sounds great to me -thou I agree that a good mic would make this better as it is in parts not easy to understand the lyrics. For a in-one-hour-demo I find this astounding and really creative! Looking forward to browse through your soundcloud! https://www.last.fm/user/derOlliM Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted August 25, 2017 Author Share Posted August 25, 2017 1 minute ago, OliverViennese said: I love this! Sounds great to me -thou I agree that a good mic would make this better as it is in parts not easy to understand the lyrics. For a in-one-hour-demo I find this astounding and really creative! Looking forward to browse through your soundcloud! thank you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drin Lon 7,875 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 I love this my only problem is I wish it was longer The verse is 😍😍😍 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
NIGHTCRAWLER 6,985 Posted August 25, 2017 Author Share Posted August 25, 2017 1 minute ago, Drin Lon said: I love this my only problem is I wish it was longer The verse is 😍😍😍 no way you're being serious If you do I'm really happy that other people can relate Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drin Lon 7,875 Posted August 25, 2017 Share Posted August 25, 2017 14 minutes ago, NIGHTCRAWLER said: no way you're being serious If you do I'm really happy that other people can relate Don't underastimate yourself. The meaning and the lyrics of your song are great Sure, production and mixing could be better, but as you said this was recorded in an hour Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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