Guest Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 lol i wrote/recorded a new song this afternoon if youd like to hear let me know what you think if you do!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
littlepotter 75,147 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 I really like it chaeri pls Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHALLOW 16,440 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 Honey, it doesn't even have a chorus It's not bad tho, i think you need to adjust the lyrics a little bit Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AIex 3,102 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 4 minutes ago, HYPODERMIC0 said: Honey, it doesn't even have a chorus since when do all songs have choruses, honey Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monster2015 1,117 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 7 minutes ago, HYPODERMIC0 said: Honey, it doesn't even have a chorus It's not bad tho, i think you need to adjust the lyrics a little bit all songs don't necessarily have choruses....you can have what's called an AAA form which is three sets of stanzas (used for a "storytelling" format). But your voice is very light and I like it! you also used my favorite chord progression A-Dm-A! (I also used it in a song I wrote). Can you maybe post you lyrics in full so I can read them? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 1 minute ago, Monster2015 said: all songs don't necessarily have choruses....you can have what's called an AAA form which is three sets of stanzas (used for a "storytelling" format). But your voice is very light and I like it! you also used my favorite chord progression A-Dm-A! (I also used it in a song I wrote). Can you maybe post you lyrics in full so I can read them? Thank you so much!! I'd love to hear your song too! The lyrics are in the description on SoundCloud Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doot 2 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 I ran. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dlioncourt91 765 Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 ^^ Me too. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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