Chic 20,830 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 I am collaborating with a producer on a new track called "You're Mine". The song is an ephemeral electronic R&B mix with wistful vocals singing spitefully about being with a man who begs for a patch to his depressive lifestyle and yet is particular enough to break the person's heart. I wrote this song about my first romantic experience with a man in which he pleaded for me to always be there for him, made me feel good about myself and then dropped the bombshell that because of certain physical nuances of my transgenderism, could not be with me. The awful way he treated me afterwards inspired me to write this song about my experience with him. Here is an LQ instrumental snippet because it's all still in the early stages of production, but this is the vibes of the verses and most of the song: https://youtube.com/watch?&v=K5O6Bi_hWvU In the final product, the verses are sung-spoken while the chorus is sung with a full airiness and breathiness that puts you in the vibe of a marijuana filled room and a low temperature summer night. And these are the full lyrics of the song. Please give me your opinion! Title: You're Mine [Verse One] He's my doped up pothead,In a smoked bed.Tasting my lips to satiate his munchies,Till his own turn red.I'm so insecure,Creme and powder clog my pores.And if I'm made of porcelain,Will my baby be interested in,My quirks, can I make them work?Are they charming or awkward?Well, I don't know, he says it's fine.Repeat like a psychotic mantra, [Chorus] "You're Mine." [x3]Do you think I believe that lie?"You're Mine." [x3]You'll run me out by tomorrow night. [Verse Two] He's my ****ed up dropout,Hiding his drought.Drowning his ruined empire in my eyes,Just to forget about.Every failure,Pleading me to be his cure.But if I'm not your physical,Idealist fantasy, will,You love, me, babe am I enough?Make you feel good about yourself?Don't ****in' know, I'm not divine.Repeat like a psychotic mantra, [Chorus] "You're Mine." [x3]Do you think I believe that lie?"You're Mine." [x3]You'll run me out by tomorrow night. [Bridge] "Are you alright?" Dare he asks.The hundredth time tonight, relax.Mm-mm, I'm listening through the phone's rings,So disobedient.And I'm glad you've got so much concern,For tables you'll tomorrow turn.If you'll break this all out of taste,That my love means less than my waist.Then you will fall without me here,I'll wash my conscious clear.I know now, dear, that you're deprived.Repeat like a psychotic mantra, [Chorus] "You're Mine." [x3]Do you think I believe that lie?"You're Mine." [x3]You'll run me out by tomorrow night. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JudasIsAHolyFoo 3,278 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 slay Monster Ball 2010, Monster Ball 2011, Born This Way Ball 2013, artRAVE 2014, Joanne World Tour 2017 (Both Nights in Toronto) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 oh my godddd feature me on this **** or let me remix!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chic 20,830 Posted August 3, 2015 Author Share Posted August 3, 2015 oh my godddd feature me on this **** or let me remix!!It'll have to be a remix, but I am working on other tracks a rapper would be perfect for c: I'm working with this particular producer on numerous songs, and one of them is a pop-rap mix. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SlayedForTheGod 665 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 It'll have to be a remix, but I am working on other tracks a rapper would be perfect for c: I'm working with this particular producer on numerous songs, and one of them is a pop-rap mix.cool. i wish i knew more people here that did their own original music cause i want to collaborate more. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chic 20,830 Posted August 3, 2015 Author Share Posted August 3, 2015 cool. i wish i knew more people here that did their own original music cause i want to collaborate more. I wish more people commented on original music. =/ A topic hating on established artists would be a big hit but there's almost no support for artists trying to make it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemeLarell 931 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 This beat is dope and I can't wait to hear the whole thing!!! I write and produce my own music as well but my first single isn't going to be released until October lol. But it's so nice to hear original music! And I love the lyrics too!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperIz 7,344 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 it sounds like it's gonna be good! The production reminds me of something Utada would do Human generated art Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemeLarell 931 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 it sounds like it's gonna be good! The production reminds me of something Utada would do I had to look up Utada on spotify and I am in love now Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperIz 7,344 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 I had to look up Utada on spotify and I am in love now awesome!lol she is so amazing. My Japanese Pop Queen tbh Human generated art Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
retroglamx 5,177 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 The lyrics are bomb!!! Pink flamingos always fascinated me. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JudasIsAHolyFoo 3,278 Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 I'm a producer and am looking for a singer :) message me if you're interested Monster Ball 2010, Monster Ball 2011, Born This Way Ball 2013, artRAVE 2014, Joanne World Tour 2017 (Both Nights in Toronto) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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