KING5KAT 223 Posted January 11, 2012 Author Share Posted January 11, 2012 That long drum build up between the verses and chorus should be shorter or louder. It's like the song just stops. But other than that it's pretty good, I like it. Okay :) That's just in the single/radio version. For the EP in a few months there's a third verse :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMTT 160 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 I'm glad I'm not the only one who doesn't likethe breaks ^_^ and I don think It takes too long to get to the chorus....except for that one break Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reloaded 1 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Flawless cover! But the song is boring. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMTT 160 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Flawless cover! But the song is boring. idts Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonsterVSAnimal 0 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Omg i like it!! :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 oh my gosh this is so boring, i dont think that your voice suits this music sorry but this isn't atall good really :( sorry Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoky 0 Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 oh my gosh this is so boring, i dont think that your voice suits this music sorry but this isn't atall good really :( sorry I'm sorry, may I call you "Def Jam"? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 I'm sorry, may I call you "Def Jam"? im not sure i quite understand what your getting at... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smoky 0 Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 im not sure i quite understand what your getting at... I mean don't give some ignorant one-liner towards this guy just because it isn't the best thing you've ever heard. I don't think it's that strong of a track but then again, I don't think Retro Dance Freak is either. This is his first polished song that he wrote and he produced. I'm sure if he was working with a producer it would be better, and if he was working with a vocal coach he'd be able to kill a song like this. If you'd ever put something out for the first time, you'd know what people say at first makes a big difference. To King5kat: The song needs work but YOU DID IT ON YOUR OWN and it seems like you put a lot of work into it. Keep making music and you can go nowhere but up. Ignore the mother ****ers. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DMTT 160 Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 oh my gosh this is so boring, i dont think that your voice suits this music sorry but this isn't atall good really :( sorry don't say that like it's a fact--it's your opinion. leave something constructive, or leave nothing at all :roll: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KING5KAT 223 Posted January 13, 2012 Author Share Posted January 13, 2012 I mean don't give some ignorant one-liner towards this guy just because it isn't the best thing you've ever heard. I don't think it's that strong of a track but then again, I don't think Retro Dance Freak is either. This is his first polished song that he wrote and he produced. I'm sure if he was working with a producer it would be better, and if he was working with a vocal coach he'd be able to kill a song like this. If you'd ever put something out for the first time, you'd know what people say at first makes a big difference. To King5kat: The song needs work but YOU DID IT ON YOUR OWN and it seems like you put a lot of work into it. Keep making music and you can go nowhere but up. Ignore the mother ****ers. Thank you so much. That really means a lot. I know it's not my best song but it's my friends' favourites and I wanted to just test the water... My next song has got no autotune, a wider vocal range, interesting music etc. It's completely contrasting. But thank you so much for the compliments + critisisms. Really means a lot to me :P :nyancat: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kayla 7,595 Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 As someone who is a big fan of trance music, I can definitely say this song has the inner "feeling" of a trance song. In a lot of songs, the focus is the chorus. The phrase "don't bore us, get to the chorus!" is evidence of that. But within the trance genre, the focus tends to be on the song as a whole. There is usually one really big build-up point, but it's not meant to be the main focal point. That being said, I really love how this song captures the concept of building up to a big point, but not letting that large point overshadow the rest of the song. The lyrics are also remind me very much of trance music lyrics. PERSONALLY, what I would like to see is the song start out with the intensity that is at the end and build up to something more. You've got a really great crescendo going with the way everything sounds, but I think this song would be TOTALLY "bangin'" if you BEGAN with the intensity you have at the end. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KING5KAT 223 Posted January 14, 2012 Author Share Posted January 14, 2012 As someone who is a big fan of trance music, I can definitely say this song has the inner "feeling" of a trance song. In a lot of songs, the focus is the chorus. The phrase "don't bore us, get to the chorus!" is evidence of that. But within the trance genre, the focus tends to be on the song as a whole. There is usually one really big build-up point, but it's not meant to be the main focal point. That being said, I really love how this song captures the concept of building up to a big point, but not letting that large point overshadow the rest of the song. The lyrics are also remind me very much of trance music lyrics. PERSONALLY, what I would like to see is the song start out with the intensity that is at the end and build up to something more. You've got a really great crescendo going with the way everything sounds, but I think this song would be TOTALLY "bangin'" if you BEGAN with the intensity you have at the end. Thank you :D I think I get it :) Thank you for all the critisisms and improvements :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ginga 22 Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Great song! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloody Mary 12 Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 Great work! Especially the instrumental Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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