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They both are flawless Jay!!

But the Freestyle is my favorite. Its so beautiful and I feel it fits the lyrics better. <3

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I really like both. :D

:heart:

Sorry I didn't see you had posted it over 1 hour ago. :rofl:

Freestyle is better, it looks too clustered in the first one cause of the maximum size allowed, I wish it could be bigger. :(

But yours is perfect. :worship:

Just one thing, could you please fix the lyrics to

"we can be strong, we can be strong

out on this lonely run on the

road to love

we can be strong, we can be strong

follow that unicorn on the

road to love"

And maybe emphasize the words lonely, unicorn and road to love?

Yeah, the size sucks now. D:

And i'll do that now. :D

They both are flawless Jay!!

But the Freestyle is my favorite. Its so beautiful and I feel it fits the lyrics better. <3

Thank you Casey!

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Wait...isn't it "Down the road to love"?

No.

And thanks Jay! <3

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What the **** have I been listening to...O__________________________O

Probably Government Hooker.

As long as I'm your hookaah

Get down the road to love

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Is this better, Diego?

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****, I forgot your avatar. :rofl:

You left the last "strong" on the next line.

If it's cause of space you can make it

"we can be strong,

we can be strong"

It's just the strong on the next line looks weird. :sweat:

And I forgot the avatar too. :dies:

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So awesome! I think I'll go with the second one cause I feel it fits the song (and the signature) better.

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