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samuelx

Okay so I don't normally post songs i've written/wrote but I feel like this is one of my best. (in terms of what I am capable of.) even though it's not finished I still would like to hear your guys's opinion on it, it's called

One Armed Man

V1
I left my home
Left my one friend
Left everything I thought was important

 

Changed the way I thought
Changed the way I think
Changed everything so that I could breathe

 

I may be crazy
I may be insane
But that's okay baby
I'm not the same

 

Chorus
I'm just a One Armed Man
Fighting for a different cause
I'm just a criminal
Just for having different thought

 

Lock me up put me inside
if that means I am a lie
Lock me up put me inside
If that means I am a lie

V2

So I'll take my one arm
and I'll fight a war
I don't care
cause i'll change the world

What do you think?

it's about fighting for your creativity, fighting for what keeps this world (or atleast mine) from going insane, even if I have one arm, and it's me against the world I'll die for what I believe in

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Judas Oyster

Same as TheFrenchGuy :)

 

But... Isnt though and think basically the same? :P

 

When "Im just a ..." I sang the rest inside my head in Judas tone haha.

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samuelx

It sound nice in my head, what does it mean to you? :)

it's about fighting for your creativity, fighting for what keeps this world (or atleast mine) from going insane, even if I have one arm, and it's me against the world I'll die for what I believe in

EDIT: adding this to OP

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samuelx

Same as TheFrenchGuy :)

 

But... Isnt though and think basically the same? :P

 

When "Im just a ..." I sang the rest inside my head in Judas tone haha.

very different than difference in terms of melody

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