Parka 1 Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Reveal hidden contents Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldenhen 1 Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 On 4/21/2012 at 1:41 AM, KingAlanI said: chapter 2 of my Hunger Games fanfic just posted. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8029534/2/ OMG I loved it and it was huge twisted in the middle of the chapter. Keep going!!!. On 4/21/2012 at 10:54 PM, Parka said: Reveal hidden contents What's DP mean? Reveal hidden contents Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingAlanI 3 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/21/2012 at 11:15 PM, Goldenhen said: OMG I loved it and it was huge twisted in the middle of the chapter. Keep going!!!. Thank you. Yeah, that twist is a defining point of my story. I'm working hard to write the rest of it, I'll upload and post about each chapter as soon as it's ready. I do like the site in general, and the chapter by chapter serial format in particular. Thanks again for telling me about it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingAlanI 3 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 Reveal hidden contents I'm straight, but I still LOL'ed at that Alexander/Liam/Josh picture Parka posted. Also, I know what DP is, but how do you do that to a guy? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pbmike 0 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/22/2012 at 1:44 AM, KingAlanI said: Reveal hidden contents I'm straight, but I still LOL'ed at that Alexander/Liam/Josh picture Parka posted. Also, I know what DP is, but how do you do that to a guy? Two dicks up the ass :hehe: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Btrs 10 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 :lmao: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryhanna 3,507 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/21/2012 at 12:08 AM, RomanReloaded said: :nacho: I honestly believe he will do a good job. Me too, he's a great director. There's a small part of me that's like "OMIFIONHDUIOS HE GON FUQ IT UP GAHSP:LWHJIOK." ...But he can't be any worse than Gary Ross. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daria 0 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 (edited) On 4/22/2012 at 2:26 AM, RomanReloaded said: I know but since he directed Bad Romance and it became a flawless music video I have high hopes that he'll do a good job. On 4/22/2012 at 2:04 AM, pbmike said: Two dicks up the ass what in Baby Jesus On The Stairs does DP mean? On 4/22/2012 at 2:07 AM, HausOfHookers said: Me too, he's a great director. There's a small part of me that's like "OMIFIONHDUIOS HE GON FUQ IT UP GAHSP:LWHJIOK." ...But he can't be any worse than Gary Ross. I know but since he directed Bad Romance and it became a flawless music video I have high hopes that he'll do a good job. On 4/22/2012 at 2:06 AM, Butters said: :lmao: Edited April 22, 2012 by RomanReloaded Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Btrs 10 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/21/2012 at 10:54 PM, Parka said: Reveal hidden contents He's so small, like a tiny doll Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pbmike 0 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/22/2012 at 2:26 AM, RomanReloaded said: what in Baby Jesus On The Stairs does DP mean? Double penetration :nacho: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daria 0 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/22/2012 at 2:38 AM, pbmike said: Double penetration :nacho: oh I get it now.... Sounds painful. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad 1 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 (edited) Just finished the last book. Loved the story, hated the ending. Reveal hidden contents I HATE how the author uses "I got shot then... i woke up in the hospital." "My sister exploded and I... woke up in a hospital." "Peeta started strangling me and... I woke up in the hospital..." ITS LAZY WRITING!!!!!!!!!!! Also, too many characters died. I started not to care after there started to be a casualty or two every 5 pages. She wrote a good story, but she is not the best writer ever born, for SURE. Edited April 22, 2012 by Toad Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daria 0 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/22/2012 at 2:57 AM, Toad said: Just finished the last book. Loved the story, hated the ending. Reveal hidden contents I HATE how the author uses "I got shot then... i woke up in the hospital." "My sister exploded and I... woke up in a hospital." "Peeta started strangling me and... I woke up in the hospital..." ITS LAZY WRITING!!!!!!!!!!! Also, too many characters died. I started not to care after there started to be a casualty or two every 5 pages. She wrote a good story, but she is not the best writer ever born, for SURE. Prim dies? D: the ending is ruined!!!! just kidding Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingAlanI 3 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 On 4/22/2012 at 2:57 AM, Toad said: Just finished the last book. Loved the story, hated the ending. Reveal hidden contents I HATE how the author uses "I got shot then... i woke up in the hospital." "My sister exploded and I... woke up in a hospital." "Peeta started strangling me and... I woke up in the hospital..." ITS LAZY WRITING!!!!!!!!!!! Also, too many characters died. I started not to care after there started to be a casualty or two every 5 pages. She wrote a good story, but she is not the best writer ever born, for SURE. Reveal hidden contents Yeah, I was confused by the later action scenes, but I thought that was somewhat appropriate to the chaos. not a pretty ending, but that's more realistic, especially considering the hell they've all been through. A Facebook friend said that the symbolism was too obvious. Personally, my main criticism of Suzanne's writing is that it was limited by being strictly first person, especially with that setting to explore. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Innovative 2 Posted April 22, 2012 Share Posted April 22, 2012 Just started the first book... it's okay so far Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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