Random song/poem I began to write

[Urban 9]

I wrote everything that was flowing through my mind, I'm not sure if it should be a song/poem because it's just a rough draft. What are your thoughts? Any advice?

I’ve seen too many crash and burn,

My success is what I yearn.

I leave everything behind,

A twisted tale, a troubled mind.

Heaven’s just a step away,

Gotta keep on fighting

Till I get my way

I’m a b---h without a cause, rebel without a gun,

Gonna make my dreams come true,

I’m a b---h without a cause, a dreamer on the run

Gonna make my name, a king of the game

Censored by society, which tells me no,

Drive fast, there’s only one way to go

Feel free,

Just the open road ahead of me

The eternal glory, the eternal flame,

Feeling like a winner, in for the kill

On a mission, to make a change

I’m a b---h without a cause, rebel without a gun,

Gonna make my dreams come true,

I’m a b---h without a cause, a dreamer on the run

Gonna make my name, a king of the game

Keep on trying, tear me down,

I’d like to see you come and try

[GagaSlayedYou 2]

I like it :)

[Urban 9]

I like it :)

Thanks I feel like theres something wrong but I can't figure out what it is

[ShadowM 3]

Amazing lyrics. :)

[Urban 9]

Amazing lyrics. :)

Yay I'm glad you think so

[Guest]

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