Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 (edited) Edited February 15, 2023 by nicolas1801 1 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesescake 3,646 Posted February 15, 2023 Share Posted February 15, 2023 the level of first-hand embarrassment I've experienced when i listen to myself mumbling lyrics with shitting pronunciation. 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesescake 3,646 Posted February 15, 2023 Share Posted February 15, 2023 (edited) I write a short chorus for Temple, maybe you'll like it? You are my temple tonight. A shelter surrounds me when the tears twist the light. You are my temple tonight. In this fast life, let the beacon of love pierce through the sky. So with this blurring sight, maybe I can see clearly just for once. Over the architectures' light Just you and I. Gaga said it's a song about feeling safe with someone so beautiful on the inside and out. A guy that's able to love someone (clearly Gaga herself) who has a face pace life, and is always on the road. Edited February 15, 2023 by Chesescake 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 55 minutes ago, Chesescake said: I write a short chorus for Temple, maybe you'll like it? You are my temple tonight. A shelter surrounds me when the tears twist the light. You are my temple tonight. In this fast life, let the beacon of love pierce through the sky. So with this blurring sight, maybe I can see clearly just for once. Over the architectures' light Just you and I. Gaga said it's a song about feeling safe with someone so beautiful on the inside and out. A guy that's able to love someone (clearly Gaga herself) who has a face pace life, and is always on the road. Thanks, I never knew that Gaga has explained Temple. About that I would to show you my lyrics on Temple (generated by ChatGPT with your explained + rewrited by me) Verse 1: In this crazy life I lead, I need someone to lean on Someone to take the weight off my shoulders Someone to calm me down Pre-Chorus: In this society, it's hard to find Someone who understands my life Someone who sees through the fame Someone who's not afraid to shine Chorus: You are my temple, my dream guy A safe haven in my crazy place You see me for who I am And love me just the same Verse 2: I've been searching high and low To find the only one Someone who can keep up with my pace Who won't leave me alone Chorus: You are my temple, my confesional A safe haven in my crazy place You see me for who I am And love me just the same Bridge: I don't need diamonds or fancy things All I need is you close to me You make me feel like a queen And I never want to say goodbye Outro: You are my temple, my temple And I'll never let you go You are my temple, my temple And I'll always love you so. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 I rewrite the TEA lyrics by Pedro Bizet (fan made during the ARTPOP era) + used ChatGPT for alternative phrases. Verse 1 I don't want to rule the world, It's a change that I prefer to see, I walk along on a lonely road, Of the many wonders to discover. You can try to hear he talks, Selling out a masterpiece, You've got pockets full of gold, But my heart won't believe with lies. Pre-chorus 1 This ain't about being kings or queens, In a battle you and me, Do you need a dose of truth? What am I supposed to do? How can you deal with it? Do you just avoid the real? There's something you gotta know, If you can't deal with me, Shut your mouth, Sip of that tea. Chorus It's been so long since I've had a sip with this feeling, I need a green detox, the truth will be the winner tonight Verse 2 I don't want to rule the world, Just to be able to live there I walk along on a lonely road, You and me in the same story You can try to believe in me, Or follow me and trusting me, You got a trunk full of gold, Think well and choose me. Pre-chorus 2 This isn't about who's on top, Or who's in control, Do you need a shot of truth? When the world tries to make us small. How can you deal with it? Do you just avoid the real? There's something you gotta know, If you can't deal with me, Shut your mouth, Sip of that tea. Chorus It's been so long since I've had a sip with this feeling, I need a green detox, the truth will be the winner tonight Pre-chorus 3 It's not about power or fame, In this battle that we wage, Do you need a shot of truth? What's the right thing to do? How can you deal with it? Do you just avoid the guilt? There's something you gotta know, If you can't deal with me, Shut your mouth, Sip of that tea. Final Chorus It's been so long since I've had a sip with this feeling, I need a new perspective, the truth will set me free. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 (edited) I finished Tinnitus lyrics. It was difficult because I found nothing official about the lyrics, only a fake snippet so i invent a story with that. "I hide from the dark side, I can't fight the light Everything I had was in your hands, then you pushed me to the ground once again" Verse 1 As I walked down the street, A stranger appeared, caught me off guard, They hit me hard and left me, in the darkness, Now I'm living with a cringy sound, it's so hard. Chorus 1 Tinnitus, tonight is us, everyday, But I won't let it beat me, no fear, I'm stronger now, won't let them win, I'll rise above it, staying like a rock. Verse 2 Timid, always stepped on by others, Now I'm standing tall and taking charge, I won't let anyone make me feel less than I am, I'll prove them wrong, show them that I'm in charge. Chorus 2 Tinnitus, tonight is us, it's all I can hear, But I won't let it beat me, no fear, I'm stronger now, won't let them win, I'll rise above it, start over and begin. Bridge I won't let the pain control who I am, I'll use it to grow, become the best I can, I'll find my strength, and soar high above, Won't let them see me break, won't give up. Outro Now it's just tonight is us Just a sound, sing my song tonight us, as loud as me I'll rise above it, keep on shining. Edited February 15, 2023 by nicolas1801 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 (edited) Now we have 5 songs ready to sing by one of you Monsters. - Tea - Onion girl - Temple - Ratchet - Tinnitus Edited February 15, 2023 by nicolas1801 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaliforniaDreamin 788 Posted February 15, 2023 Share Posted February 15, 2023 (edited) I have tinnitus it’s male vocals idk if that’ll work tho Edited February 15, 2023 by CaliforniaDreamin Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 15, 2023 Author Share Posted February 15, 2023 I can try, can you upload this on your drive or zippyshare ... Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Chesescake 3,646 Posted February 16, 2023 Share Posted February 16, 2023 (edited) Hey, well I record a little 13 seconds Temple chorus you write. I used Mr. Uninvited's song Temple as instrumental, which my vocal should start at 00:19 I guess. https://on.soundcloud.com/TRAfn Edited February 16, 2023 by Chesescake Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eilim 331 Posted February 16, 2023 Author Share Posted February 16, 2023 48 minutes ago, Chesescake said: Hey, well I record a little 13 seconds Temple chorus you write. I used Mr. Uninvited's song Temple as instrumental, which my vocal should start at 00:19 I guess. https://on.soundcloud.com/TRAfn I don't know if it's your mic quality or your voice, Gaga AI render is not really good. https://soundcloud.com/eilim-music/voice30 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesescake 3,646 Posted February 16, 2023 Share Posted February 16, 2023 3 minutes ago, nicolas1801 said: I don't know if it's your mic quality or your voice, Gaga AI render is not really good. https://soundcloud.com/eilim-music/voice30 I dont understand how SC work, i just cant Also yes it's bad because... it's was recorded through phone and either do I have proper equipment... sorry 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PartySick 144,818 Posted February 16, 2023 Share Posted February 16, 2023 20 hours ago, Chesescake said: I write a short chorus for Temple, maybe you'll like it? You are my temple tonight. A shelter surrounds me when the tears twist the light. You are my temple tonight. In this fast life, let the beacon of love pierce through the sky. So with this blurring sight, maybe I can see clearly just for once. Over the architectures' light Just you and I. Gaga said it's a song about feeling safe with someone so beautiful on the inside and out. A guy that's able to love someone (clearly Gaga herself) who has a face pace life, and is always on the road. You wrote this? It's really good 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chesescake 3,646 Posted February 16, 2023 Share Posted February 16, 2023 34 minutes ago, PartySick said: You wrote this? It's really good Oh you- Also can you sing? Or do you know anyone else on this site that can sing? 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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