Jay.P 2,331 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 Tried to improve the demo as much as I can. I like it more than the album version (it's a little too noisy and the chorus doesn't sound good, idk what they did to it but it sounded better in the versions we heard before) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_x9u0dxELoptLe8i0AQLUL_Eqg2L4fxB/view?usp=sharing Do you hear that? It's poison. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
homomo 23,836 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 The demo has always sounded better to me. Especially her performance at Swinefest. I remember watching that performance and thinking it was her sexiest song. It honestly still is (in that performance anyway) The agony and remorse in her voice just makes the song sound sooooo goooood 0110100001100101011011000110110001101111 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARTGOD 3,266 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 I’m sorry but the demo has always sounded so lethargic and boring compared to the final version. The chorus specially sounds so empty and lifeless and the final version of the bridge is so so so much better. I do not understand what everyone sees in the demo. You did a good job at improving the demo but I still much prefer the album version sorry . Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PopMusicForever 503 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 14 minutes ago, ARTGOD said: I’m sorry but the demo has always sounded so lethargic and boring compared to the final version. The chorus specially sounds so empty and lifeless and the final version of the bridge is so so so much better. I do not understand what everyone sees in the demo. You did a good job at improving the demo but I still much prefer the album version sorry . I agree! The chorus in the final version is heavenly and the “you were in my” are just so good Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay.P 2,331 Posted April 6, 2021 Author Share Posted April 6, 2021 3 minutes ago, ARTGOD said: I’m sorry but the demo has always sounded so lethargic and boring compared to the final version. The chorus specially sounds so empty and lifeless and the final version of the bridge is so so so much better. I do not understand what everyone sees in the demo. You did a good job at improving the demo but I still much prefer the album version sorry . Yeah I understand. I wanted to use the other bridge too but also didn't want to change the demo too much. I would also prefer the album version if it wasn't for that ugly sounding chorus. It really could've sounded so much better. In my opinion it absolutely ruined the song. Do you hear that? It's poison. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay.P 2,331 Posted April 6, 2021 Author Share Posted April 6, 2021 Just now, PopMusicForever said: I agree! The chorus in the final version is heavenly and the “you were in my” are just so good I included those in this version too Do you hear that? It's poison. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PopMusicForever 503 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 58 minutes ago, Jay.P said: I included those in this version too Not like the final version but overall you did a good job... I envy people who know how to produce, mix or create instrumentals and **** Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gagaism 9,932 Posted April 6, 2021 Share Posted April 6, 2021 The demo, album version, swine fest version or whatever... everything about this song is amazing. Thanks for that, great job Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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