Gagi 2,750 Posted November 11, 2020 Share Posted November 11, 2020 Hey you! I just uploaded a new song to my YouTube channel. The song is about being in love with a straight friend as a homosexual. I hope not too many can relate. Kind of risky since some of my followers are real life friends who eventually don’t even know that I‘m... 💅🏻 haha! Let me know what you think if you like. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Esteban 2,300 Posted November 11, 2020 Share Posted November 11, 2020 First I was wondering "How can a water bottle be a good metaphor" (Plastic Bag ptsd) but it's well find and well brought I like lyrics, I can relate so much (like everyone here I think ) It reminds me my teenage stories. Good song and pleasant voice, maybe it needs more vocal effects on the chorus and an longer outro but I like it! Thank you for sharing it with us, keep going Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gagi 2,750 Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 5 minutes ago, Esteban said: First I was wondering "How can a water bottle be a good metaphor" (Plastic Bag ptsd) but it's well find and well brought I like lyrics, I can relate so much (like everyone here I think ) It reminds me my teenage stories. Good song and pleasant voice, maybe it needs more vocal effects on the chorus and an longer outro but I like it! Thank you for sharing it with us, keep going Not the infamous plastic bag Thank you anyway ! I see what you mean with the „vocal effects on the chorus“ but I wanted to keep it simple for an acoustic-esque sound Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimisaMonster 31,073 Posted November 11, 2020 Share Posted November 11, 2020 1st of all that's the most bad ass way to come out in a song and be so vulnerable and brave to share such personal feelings about a close friend! The song is actually very catchy and the lyrics are so relatable! You did amazing! Stream my new single, 💜"Heartbeat"💜, on Spotify! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gagi 2,750 Posted November 11, 2020 Author Share Posted November 11, 2020 7 minutes ago, TimisaMonster said: 1st of all that's the most bad ass way to come out in a song and be so vulnerable and brave to share such personal feelings about a close friend! The song is actually very catchy and the lyrics are so relatable! You did amazing! Thank you! imma be honest though, it might be a „felt cute delete later“ moment Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pussycat 3,514 Posted November 11, 2020 Share Posted November 11, 2020 I like it! Your lyrics float well. One thing I'd change is the title- the metaphor is nice actually but I think it would be more interesting if it wouldn't also be the title. Imo something more subtle would work better Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gagi 2,750 Posted November 12, 2020 Author Share Posted November 12, 2020 5 hours ago, pussycat said: I like it! Your lyrics float well. One thing I'd change is the title- the metaphor is nice actually but I think it would be more interesting if it wouldn't also be the title. Imo something more subtle would work better I understand that, thank you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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