ROM Adobe Draft entry

[illbekind 1,316]

Any feedback welcome!

[Sherry 4,709]

Yasss 

[Where is LG7 3,720]

[illbekind 1,316]

15 minutes ago, Where is LG7 said:

is that good or bad?

[alsemanche 91,819]

I like it but I have an issue with the blending in the middle between the ariana and gaga photo and the photo of gaga's face. It feels like there's a sharp line separating the two (even though that's not the case in reality). Maybe play with the "flood warning" sign and the silhouette next to it + the vertical lines on the other end of the photo so that it creates less separation between the two photos. I hope this makes any sense 

[illbekind 1,316]

1 hour ago, alsemanche said:

I like it but I have an issue with the blending in the middle between the ariana and gaga photo and the photo of gaga's face. It feels like there's a sharp line separating the two (even though that's not the case in reality). Maybe play with the "flood warning" sign and the silhouette next to it + the vertical lines on the other end of the photo so that it creates less separation between the two photos. I hope this makes any sense 

[My Name Isnt Alice 3,737]

Ok i'm going to be honest the biggest issue is ofcourse the lack of a focal point and contrast (without a focal point our brains doesn't really know where to focus and contrast makes things pop) everything looks scattered and the effect you want with the text I think you didn't did it effectively

Just my insights 

[illbekind 1,316]

3 minutes ago, My Name Isnt Alice said:

Ok i'm going to be honest the biggest issue is ofcourse the lack of a focal point and contrast (without a focal point our brains doesn't really know where to focus and contrast makes things pop) everything looks scattered and the effect you want with the text I think you didn't did it effectively

Just my insights 

Thx

Which text do you mean? and how can I do it more effectively?

[MANiCURE 6 10,197]

This is pretty good ! ^^

Maybe there's too much going on, too much text 

[My Name Isnt Alice 3,737]

1 minute ago, illbekind said:

Thx

Which text do you mean? and how can I do it more effectively?

The retro hud ones but every text doesn't seem to go well/marry with each other gaga's aesthetic this era is very japanese sci fi so I think you should go with that 

You really need to find a way to make things that need more focus seem to be the most prominent ones which can be done by resizing, contrasting, color etc.

I'll give you inspirations aligned with what i think chromatica's aesthetic is

Here's an example of hierarchy of typography 

[illbekind 1,316]

11 minutes ago, My Name Isnt Alice said:

The retro hud ones but every text doesn't seem to go well/marry with each other gaga's aesthetic this era is very japanese sci fi so I think you should go with that 

You really need to find a way to make things that need more focus seem to be the most prominent ones which can be done by resizing, contrasting, color etc.

I'll give you inspirations aligned with what i think chromatica's aesthetic is

Here's an example of hierarchy of typography 

Thanks but its based off the ROM video not the Chromatica album book

[My Name Isnt Alice 3,737]

1 minute ago, illbekind said:

Thanks but its based off the ROM video not the Chromatica album book

This looks good because those texts and icons are scattered effectively following those retro huds aesthetic and the eye is the focal point 

Anyways just do what u can do best rn and i wish you a goodluck 

[HeavyMetalLover 16]

Composition needs some work - it’s looking very unbalanced. Try to choose an element as a main focal point, and design around it. The green is kind of canceling out everything else. Make that less prominent. I think there’s too much going on in general - try to simplify and choose a few elements that you like the most, instead of throwing everything at the wall. The text is a little too busy as well.

[Glamourpuss 29,062]

I like what you're going for. I think the rain on me on the bottom left should be a bit more faded like the other details because it grabs my attention and pulls my eyes away from everything else. It all looks good though. Great work. 

[illbekind 1,316]

26 minutes ago, HeavyMetalLover said:

Composition needs some work - it’s looking very unbalanced. Try to choose an element as a main focal point, and design around it. The green is kind of canceling out everything else. Make that less prominent. I think there’s too much going on in general - try to simplify and choose a few elements that you like the most, instead of throwing everything at the wall. The text is a little too busy as well.

 

11 minutes ago, Glamourpuss said:

I like what you're going for. I think the rain on me on the bottom left should be a bit more faded like the other details because it grabs my attention and pulls my eyes away from everything else. It all looks good though. Great work. 

Thanks - what do you think now?