EdgeOfRomance 0 Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 Hi everyone! Since its obviously clear that The Edge Of Glory is so *** popping delicious.. i decided to create a poem influenced by TEOG for my AP English class. And i need your criticism please!!!! its called: "You and Me" I am with you through the boldest thick and the smallest thin I won't leave you until that time when He summons our presence and finalizes our end So you and me we got to live life you see and leave absolutely not one regret into our momentous legacy the dreams that elapsed out of our tongues doesn't mark our righteous place in the Golden Gates It was our fight to enliven those glorious words that will forever truly summarize our fates Now what's left is for our essences to flow through Heaven's mighty wind so with hearts caressed and hands together let us now begin We'll depart at The Edge Of Glory the farplane is where we will leave though fear not my love because our love will forever reign in eternity.. PLEASE BE KIND IN YOUR COMMENTS!! THANXS YA'LL Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
chromatikev 136 Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 It's beautiful Why did I not think of writing an Edge of Glory inspired poem during my poetry unit... AGHHHH :stabbed: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
EdgeOfRomance 0 Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 It's beautiful Why did I not think of writing an Edge of Glory inspired poem during my poetry unit... AGHHHH :stabbed: omg gurl thx you!!!!! and im sorry you didnt get the chance.... ill mourn for you... :giveup: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BORNTHISWAY112 0 Posted November 2, 2012 Share Posted November 2, 2012 Just amazing I cannot do this you are so talented! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
EdgeOfRomance 0 Posted November 2, 2012 Author Share Posted November 2, 2012 Just amazing I cannot do this you are so talented! omg gurl THX YOU SO MUCH. these comments are making my all nighter less paiinful! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
EdgeOfRomance 0 Posted November 3, 2012 Author Share Posted November 3, 2012 Thanks you slutty hoes for your comments I appreciate them!!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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