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ProjectJoanne

Hey! So I don't know if I wanted this song to be on the new album, so I'll let you be the judge of that :laughga:

I've been working on a song I wrote a year ago all throughout today and last night, it's called Now That I Know. I ALWAYS loved the chorus hook and the production (kind of :huntyga:) so I took it to the test with this new version. 

On the first version I used one sample loop and it's the A# C# Fm Cm - A# C# Fm D# synth melody, but luckily I didn't use it in the new version so there aren't any samples or anything like that, just synths all made by me :happy:

VERSION 1

 

Lyrics: 

Spoiler

Now know!
It was
Super
Obvi-ous!
That you
Couldn’t 
Get me 
Off of your mi-i-i-ind

Saw it
With my
Very
Ow-ow-own eyes
You can’t
Push me
Further
Into your lying role!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

Tried to
Run from
You’re truth
But I know every bi-it!
Now that
Your gone
I’m done
With you, rat

Saw it
With my
Very
Ow-ow-own eyes
You can’t
Hurt me
Anymore
I’m out of your live role!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

Your secret!
Your secret! (I know it all!)
NOW THAT I KNOW!!!!!
ABOUT HIIIIIIIIIM!!!!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

(Key Change)
But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

 

VERSION 2 (New and [hopefully] improved!)

 

Lyrics:

Spoiler

Now That I Know
By: DC

Now I know!
It was
Super
Obvi-ous!
That you
Couldn’t 
Get me 
Off of your mi-i-i-ind

Saw it
With my
Very
Ow-ow-own eyes
You can’t
Pull me
Further
Into your lie pool!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!
Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

Tried to
Run from
You’re truth
But I know every bi-it!
Since I
Saw you 
With that 
Thing you call a “him”

Saw it
With my
Very
Ow-ow-own eyes
You can’t
Hurt me
Anymore
I’m out of your life role!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret!

Your secret!
Your secret!
Your secret!
Your secret!
Your secret!
Now that I know
What you did, your sins glow!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret...

Now that I know!!!

But Now-now-now that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
Now-now-now that I know-know-know about-out him and your little secret!

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
About-out-out-out oh-Woah-oh-oh
I know-know-know about-out-out hi-im-im-im and your little secret! 

Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
Ou!
Now-ow-ow that I know-know-know
Ou!
Your little secret!

 

DCgaga

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lovedillon

From one songwriter to another I’m just gonna be honest because I think you deserve that much. The first was pretty bad but I’m happy to say the second version isn’t as bad as the first. It was actually tolerable to listen to. Keep working on it, the second definitely shows progress. If you keep working on it I think you’ll be able to pull out a pretty decent song.

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ProjectJoanne
57 minutes ago, lovedillon said:

From one songwriter to another I’m just gonna be honest because I think you deserve that much. The first was pretty bad but I’m happy to say the second version isn’t as bad as the first. It was actually tolerable to listen to. Keep working on it, the second definitely shows progress.

And I'll be honestly with you, that writing on the first one isn't bad at all... it was TERRIBLE :laughga:

Thanks, I'm always looking to improve! :heart:

DCgaga

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Arcanum

I came here running wishing for a Mariah's remake off "Now that I know".

Something's weird with your track in an awkward sense. Nice choice of stems etc. on the second one. You need to stabilize the sonic direction more especially if there's vocals involved. I guess there's room for improvement! You seem talented! :hor:

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Dominic

It sounds like Britney I Wanna Go. Get ready for court :green:

Nice work :)

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lovedillon
1 minute ago, ProjectJoanne said:

And I'll be honestly with you, that writing on the first one isn't bad at all... it was TERRIBLE :laughga:

Thanks, I'm always looking to improve! :heart:

Lol well, you said it not me 😆 but yeah I think if you keep working on it you’ll end up with a nice song. There’s plenty to work with & your voice isn’t bad. You’re actually singing on key which makes me happy since some “singers” on here don’t know what singing on key is 🤷🏻‍♀️

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ProjectJoanne
57 minutes ago, Arcanum said:

I came here running wishing for a Mariah's remake off "Now that I know".

Something's weird with your track in an awkward sense. Nice choice of stems etc. on the second one. You need to stabilize the sonic direction more especially if there's vocals involved. I guess there's room for improvement! You seem talented! :hor:

Thanks, and totally agree, it's so weird like I didn't even realize how unstable the vocals were till after I rendered it :laughga:

DCgaga

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ProjectJoanne
58 minutes ago, Dominic said:

It sounds like Britney I Wanna Go. Get ready for court :green:

Nice work :)

Thanks :laughga:

DCgaga

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ProjectJoanne
57 minutes ago, lovedillon said:

Lol well, you said it not me but yeah I think if you keep working on it you’ll end up with a nice song. There’s plenty to work with & your voice isn’t bad. You’re actually singing on key which makes me happy since some “singers” on here don’t know what singing on key is

Op- Tea, but true tea :reductive: :laughga:

DCgaga
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KEVIN STEVE

That first version was awful (sorry :cryga:) but the new version is good! :party:It actually might be my favorite song from you :vegas:

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ProjectJoanne
Just now, KEVIN STEVE said:

That first version was awful (sorry :cryga:) but the new version is good! :party:It actually might be my favorite song from you :vegas:

Deserved, it really was awful :laughga:

But thanks! I’m glad you like it so much! I’ll keep working on it :happy:

DCgaga
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KEVIN STEVE
8 minutes ago, ProjectJoanne said:

Deserved, it really was awful :laughga:

But thanks! I’m glad you like it so much! I’ll keep working on it :happy:

To be honest, don't be scared to sing high notes with your head voice! I think it would be even better if you sang the whole 2nd verse with your high voice (just like you did when you sang "tried to" to start that verse)

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1 minute ago, KEVIN STEVE said:

To be honest, don't be scared to sing high notes with your head voice! I think it would be even better if you sang the whole 2nd verse with your high voice (just like you did when you sang "tried to" to start that verse)

Ou! How about I make that a backing vocal? That would sound really nice ontop of the lower vocals :firega:

DCgaga

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KEVIN STEVE
2 minutes ago, ProjectJoanne said:

Ou! How about I make that a backing vocal? That would sound really nice ontop of the lower vocals :firega:

I think it would be better as your lead vocals, cuz you already have backing vocals in the chorus, and singing higher in the 2nd verse would give more life to the song. Especially since you're singing the chorus with low notes. Pretty much like Sinner's Prayer, Gaga sings higher in the second half of the song.

It's great when a song grows as you're listening to it! :woohoo:

But it's just my opinion, feel free to do whatever you want :kara:

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