Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted January 27, 2018 Share Posted January 27, 2018 Hey girls, what's good? I'm back again and since Joanne is the latest track being promoted I decided to cover it I wanted to do the Piano Version cause it's slower and I would have been able to play with the melody a lil but I couldn't find the instrumental. So instead I tried to incorporate some of the PV's melody in this one. I hope you like it as always I'm open to opinions so y'all can help me improve! I really want to do this for a livin' someday. Oh and listen with headphones if possible! P.S. : Please Gaga @BorisIsHere don't sue me! http://www.smule.com/p/360188503_1962032856 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doot 2 Posted January 27, 2018 Share Posted January 27, 2018 You clearly can sing. My suggestion would be to reduce or eliminate whatever alteration or auto tune you did to your voice, and increase the volume of the vocals. It sorta sounds like you are singing into a fan but you got chops, bro! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarahandAlba 106 Posted January 27, 2018 Share Posted January 27, 2018 Wow, that’s a really good rendition, you have a beautiful voice! It sounds like there’s a bit of feedback from the microphone or something which impedes the clarity of ur voice, but otherwise amazing! My daughter also covered Joanne in a video, her voice is not the best, but she put her heart into it. Please enjoy... https://youtu.be/wOBYOIQmTGO Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted January 27, 2018 Author Share Posted January 27, 2018 21 hours ago, Doot said: You clearly can sing. My suggestion would be to reduce or eliminate whatever alteration or auto tune you did to your voice, and increase the volume of the vocals. It sorta sounds like you are singing into a fan but you got chops, bro! Lmao thanks!! It doesn't have any auto tune though it has some reverb. But yes maybe I overdid it! Thanks for the advice! You are welcome to check my profile on that site. You may find other songs you like! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted January 27, 2018 Author Share Posted January 27, 2018 19 minutes ago, SarahandAlba said: Wow, that’s a really good rendition, you have a beautiful voice! It sounds like there’s a bit of feedback from the microphone or something which impedes the clarity of ur voice, but otherwise amazing! My daughter also covered Joanne in a video, her voice is not the best, but she put her heart into it. Please enjoy... https://youtu.be/wOBYOIQmTGO Thank you that's very sweet! There is a filter applied to the vocals maybe that's the issue. Also I record using my iPad's mic which is crappy to say the least I'm planning on saving some bucks to get a studio mic. That would do the job! I would really love to hear your daughter's cover <3 although I can't cause it says the video isn't available Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Anatomy 2,284 Posted January 27, 2018 Share Posted January 27, 2018 You have great pitch. But almost rebotically so. The way you deliver your lines don't exhibit much dynamics. So just take that great sense of pitch you have and then add a little power, emotion and presence to it. Also, is English your primary language? Because there were moments where I felt like words were running together or not exactly pronounced right. Whether it is or isn't just work on annunciation. Sometimes we get so lost in the style of singing that we forget to be clear. Overall incredible incredible job. Keep practicing because you have some seriously great raw talent. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarahandAlba 106 Posted January 28, 2018 Share Posted January 28, 2018 Hi again, maybe this link will work so you can view Alba’s Joanne video... https://youtu.be/wOBYOIQmTG0 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted January 28, 2018 Author Share Posted January 28, 2018 20 hours ago, Strigoi said: You have great pitch. But almost rebotically so. The way you deliver your lines don't exhibit much dynamics. So just take that great sense of pitch you have and then add a little power, emotion and presence to it. Also, is English your primary language? Because there were moments where I felt like words were running together or not exactly pronounced right. Whether it is or isn't just work on annunciation. Sometimes we get so lost in the style of singing that we forget to be clear. Overall incredible incredible job. Keep practicing because you have some seriously great raw talent. Thank you this is actually very helpful! There are other covers I did on that site/app you're also welcome to check that out. I sing in different styles according to my mood or sometimes to the emotion that the song is trying to convey. On this one I guess I focused too much on the pitch and didn't think much about the enunciation. Eglish is my second language, I speak primarily Spanish. When I re-listened to it I noticed I said "thing" instead of "think" and "so" instead of "sore" and things like that lmao. P.S.: oh, and you're so kind for saying I have a good pitch! But sometimes I'm a little off, you're welcome to check that out on the app too Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted January 28, 2018 Author Share Posted January 28, 2018 20 hours ago, SarahandAlba said: Hi again, maybe this link will work so you can view Alba’s Joanne video... https://youtu.be/wOBYOIQmTG0 This is so adorable! She's very cute and talented! Claps to you you for introducing her to the Queen at such a young age But srsly my advice to you would be to keep her surrounded by music, she is clearly very interested and, you know, music will help shape her creativity and teach her tons of things Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted February 7, 2018 Author Share Posted February 7, 2018 OMG Sarah! Gaga retweeted Alba's video! I just saw it! She must be so happy! Congrats to the little angel! Sending lots of love to you both @SarahandAlba Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SarahandAlba 106 Posted February 7, 2018 Share Posted February 7, 2018 Hey, thanks so much! We saw it last night, so unbelievably excited! Alba’s number one birthday wish was for Lady Gaga to see her video, & it came true! Today Alba turned 4! ❤️ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlotte Quinn 848 Posted February 7, 2018 Author Share Posted February 7, 2018 33 minutes ago, SarahandAlba said: Hey, thanks so much! We saw it last night, so unbelievably excited! Alba’s number one birthday wish was for Lady Gaga to see her video, & it came true! Today Alba turned 4! ❤️ She's a superstar ❤ Happy birthday Alba! What an amazing surprise! This is so random but I thought you might want to know it. A couple of days ago I was watching that "Google goes Gaga" long interview and they mentioned that 10 year old Maria who made a cover of Born this way. It gave me chills and I instantly thought of Alba's video. It was so surreal seeing it on Gaga's twitter the next day! Also, that might have been be the best birthday present ever Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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