Review my assignment

[kabirartfling 9,063]

We were asked to make GRAZIA cover inspired by ID magazine or DAZED magazine. 

Like a loyal monster, I decided to give gaga her promo 

 

It's my first time, let me know how it is! Thankyou 💓

 

 

[Mindblown 6,711]

Bring the Gaga image down so the pink border doesn't show.

[AmericanGUY 4,609]

living for the idea! but the fonts should be more retro

[FATCAT 60,042]

I really like it, just needs a few fixes!

1. Bring Gaga down so you don't see the pink border, as mentioned above

2. Add shadow to the words, to make them easier to read and to make them more professional!

3. Try making "Throwback" italicized so it blends with the hashtag, nothing critical.

[Easy 5,298]

Just now, AmericanGUY said:

living for the idea! but the fonts should be more retro

Especially the #THROWBACK part. That font doesn’t work with the whole thing at all. 

but the picture choice and color is good.

[loathereality 26,395]

can you add a black border to gaga

i think the cover requires more contrast, this version seems a bit distracting that the focus is more on the background of lipsticks rather than gaga

a thick black border around gaga may fix that

 

[PunkTheFunk 124,432]

Love it 

Some suggestions:

1. Try to keep Gaga's face in the center of the page (shift it a bit to the right basically), and you could also make her face a bit bigger.

2. Make the font more retro like the others have said.

[Florian 19,967]

I like the concept a lot

But as many people said you should rework the font (it has always been my main issue so I feel you sis )

Also I think your color scheme is way too busy. You have blue, yellow, orange/copper from the hair, bright red, Gaga's lipstick red, 2 shades of pink. That's a lot visually 

[JiWang 61]

I think the 80s and Fashion should be in the same size, and change the pink color to the hashtag, and align them to the left. 

Also, as others said, you should add shadows to the words to make it look more retro 

[Oriane 21,057]

As others said, a different font would be better, and the size of the text doesn't have to be that big, as you can see on the covers you said.

Also, if you have some skills in photography editing, you should change the tones of the picture a bit, because the colors lack a bit of saturation or something, and it works in the context of the picture on its own, but here it doesn't work with the background, it's not natural.