theahsfan 13,595 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 Everyone criticising him needs to realise that this is his first track.. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salvador Sequea 813 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 1 hour ago, Hoss said: The opinions of you guys might decide if I decide to pursue a career in the music industry or not. Let me tell you that our opinions shouldn't decide your career, it's all about your will. Everybody may tell you no, but if you feel like yes, it will be yes indeed . That being said I must tell you that FL Studio usually is not the common program to build music, it's more like a mixing software, very simple. Even tho I think you nailed it with this beat. I think is actually amazing being the first one you made so, imagine the ones after . I can totally hear this in a club or even in a Festival or something, very energetic! Try to find a proper mic to solve the vocals and I will recommend to find this little software called Pro Tools. Is the one they use in the big industry . Looking forward to any update ! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuuri 21,636 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 2 minutes ago, theahsfan said: Everyone criticising him needs to realise that this is his first track.. Well criticism is to be expected when someone asks a question whether or not their art is good or not. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
and i oop 1,360 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 This instrumental is amazing! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoss 2,101 Posted January 12, 2018 Author Share Posted January 12, 2018 4 minutes ago, Salvador Sequea said: Let me tell you that our opinions shouldn't decide your career, it's all about your will. Everybody may tell you no, but if you feel like yes, it will be yes indeed . That being said I must tell you that FL Studio usually is not the common program to build music, it's more like a mixing software, very simple. Even tho I think you nailed it with this beat. I think is actually amazing being the first one you made so, imagine the ones after . I can totally hear this in a club or even in a Festival or something, very energetic! Try to find a proper mic to solve the vocals and I will recommend to find this little software called Pro Tools. Is the one they use in the big industry . Looking forward to any update ! Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me. And I will definitely check out that software because it’s been recommended to me before Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoss 2,101 Posted January 12, 2018 Author Share Posted January 12, 2018 1 minute ago, LadyGagaIsBest said: This instrumental is amazing! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boyboi12 2,125 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 37 minutes ago, Hoss said: Do you not think it’s good? I kind of made it purposefully generic to sound more radio friendly Yeah but you should let me touch it up Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJoanneJoker 3,866 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 I actually like this instrumental A LOT great job dude, why not, try to send your demos to labels and talent agencies Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoss 2,101 Posted January 12, 2018 Author Share Posted January 12, 2018 1 minute ago, Beytwice said: I actually like this instrumental A LOT great job dude, why not, try to send your demos to labels and talent agencies omg that's a good idea maybe i will Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJoanneJoker 3,866 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 1 minute ago, Hoss said: omg that's a good idea maybe i will you should I love it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrelevant 20,273 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 19 minutes ago, theahsfan said: Everyone criticising him needs to realise that this is his first track.. So we shouldn't criticize him? I can't listen to the song atm, but if there's no criticism, people can't learn what to do better next time. 광야로 걸어가 알아 네 home ground Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoss 2,101 Posted January 12, 2018 Author Share Posted January 12, 2018 18 minutes ago, Sharyu said: Well criticism is to be expected when someone asks a question whether or not their art is good or not. 1 minute ago, Irrelevant said: So we shouldn't criticize him? I can't listen to the song atm, but if there's no criticism, people can't learn what to do better next time. YASS I want everyone to drag me it will help me make it better but also don’t be afraid to praise me Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riley 1,295 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 Do you have any musical background (i.e. can you read music, do you play piano or guitar, etc.) ? I only ask this because some of the notes clashed (at least, to my ear) as if there were melodies out of key -- and so maybe some work on the chord progressions could be improved ? Truly I'm impressed at the instrumental itself without looking at the lyrics because personally It took me forever to figure out how to master/mix/render songs I made in DAW softwares like the one you're using (FL Studio) so not bad for your first mix ever! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoss 2,101 Posted January 12, 2018 Author Share Posted January 12, 2018 2 minutes ago, Riley said: Do you have any musical background (i.e. can you read music, do you play piano or guitar, etc.) ? I only ask this because some of the notes clashed (at least, to my ear) as if there were melodies out of key -- and so maybe some work on the chord progressions could be improved ? Truly I'm impressed at the instrumental itself without looking at the lyrics because personally It took me forever to figure out how to master/mix/render songs I made in DAW softwares like the one you're using (FL Studio) so not bad for your first mix ever! I have very little musical background tbh bedsides vocals and a mere knowledge of piano. I used to play when I was younger but abandoned it, wish i hadn’t At what point do you think the notes clashed? And thank you so much! Means a lot Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Riley 1,295 Posted January 12, 2018 Share Posted January 12, 2018 1 minute ago, Hoss said: I have very little musical background tbh bedsides vocals and a mere knowledge of piano. I used to play when I was younger but abandoned it, wish i hadn’t At what point do you think the notes clashed? And thank you so much! Means a lot Okay upon second listen, maybe not clash but maybe just...awkward(?) melody transitions? I really can't put my finger on it - and maybe I need to hear it with the vocals/melodies of the lyrics to hear it all come together but something isn't clicking for me I think flow and arrangement is probably what it is but I'm not certain. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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