Chromatislaps 34,773 Posted December 7, 2017 Author Share Posted December 7, 2017 7 minutes ago, Cruzifix said: I officially Stan a legend I used to date a guy that produced a bunch of music and even got a label deal, but it is incomparable to what you have just showed us. I will say my only issues with the song are: 1)The violins would be more pleasing to the ear if the notes were either elongated or reverbed a little and 2) there was more variation to the track. There were so many things going on, but there was never a high and a low. But otherwise, I love this and am definitely interested in your debut album! Yeah I agree...I haven't touched this demo since 2014, and ever since I've improved...so when I'm rebuilding this track I'm gonna make sure to improve those points you mentioned Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
2681967391 38 Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Gimme a try Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatislaps 34,773 Posted December 8, 2017 Author Share Posted December 8, 2017 7 minutes ago, 2681967391 said: Gimme a try I'll message u in a bit Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bad Kids 3,048 Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Give me the thing that I love. And when you say my name, like white horses on the waves, I think it feels the same, as an ocean in my veins. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloody hooker 6,445 Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 Your production is better than anything I make. My critiques: The song matches what I imagined ACT II to sound like. The overall production needs to be cleaned up a bit. Some parts sound like they were recorded on a phone (for texture ), and put into the song. I feel like the beat break and strings before 1:26 and at 2:13 need to mesh together, but keep the beat break in the left ear channel and the strings in the right ear channel, just not as extreme. I did a similar thing in one of my recent projects. Around 1:26, the production reminds me of Government Hooker. Overall, I stan This mutual gaze was a “longing to touch” or a "pre-coitus" stare. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
2681967391 38 Posted December 8, 2017 Share Posted December 8, 2017 I love the dark synth that gimme a TFM - BTW mixed vibe. Good job Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bad Kids 3,048 Posted December 9, 2017 Share Posted December 9, 2017 It sounds so interesting and cool! Reminds me of Infected Mushroom a little and it's very theatrical like what Gaga would like, and it sounds like an interlude for her tour too! And when you say my name, like white horses on the waves, I think it feels the same, as an ocean in my veins. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Original Diva 4,945 Posted December 11, 2017 Share Posted December 11, 2017 i would love to hear it excuse me no Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatislaps 34,773 Posted December 11, 2017 Author Share Posted December 11, 2017 6 hours ago, Original Diva said: i would love to hear it I'll message u Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burqace 15 Posted December 15, 2017 Share Posted December 15, 2017 Kinda interested here Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chromatislaps 34,773 Posted December 22, 2017 Author Share Posted December 22, 2017 On 15-12-2017 at 11:42 PM, Burqace said: Kinda interested here still up for a listen and giving me some feedback? I'll PM u if you want? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burqace 15 Posted December 23, 2017 Share Posted December 23, 2017 On 22/12/2017 at 3:43 AM, Derpplause said: still up for a listen and giving me some feedback? I'll PM u if you want? Yep go ahead Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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