Jjang 2,262 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Thanks I feel like I have a lot of work to do, do you think classes help? I like it, I love how its all concise, and I see what you mean about me ( how it sounds like I ran out of ideas part) because yours doesn't have that, its great I love the chorus and the meaning Yeah Thanks a lot !,I face my own problems as a songwriter too as you can see above though! in fact i'm writing a song right now. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativenewyorker 1,190 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Well it's only a couple of lyrics here and there but 80% of it is not the same,As much as i love Lana i have to admit a lot of her songs include the same lyrics and same lines. I really don't even try,It just comes naturally I was born to be a Lana Del Rey copycat Jesus save me It's okay. I'm a writer too and lately my songs have taken on an Americana theme.. :cry: Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jjang 2,262 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 It's okay. I'm a writer too and lately my songs have taken on an Americana theme.. :cry: Show me your teeth Meaning your songs But wait... 3 user(s) are reading this topic 2 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users Jjang, nativenewyorker, Bing (1) Who is you? Who Is You ? :nails: Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Urban 9 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Yeah Thanks a lot !,I face my own problems as a songwriter too as you can see above though! in fact i'm writing a song right now. Everyone has some kind of imperfection, its a part of art. Post it when you finish, I wanna see Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativenewyorker 1,190 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Show me your teeth Meaning your songs Time to dig out the notebooks. Let me find some good ones! and it seems we have a lurker Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SidDays 244 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 (edited) My lana inspired instrumental: http://soundcloud.com/siddheshkarekar/superheroism what u think Edited February 17, 2013 by Toxic Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbuHassan1992 766 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Thanks I feel like I have a lot of work to do, do you think classes help? no no no no, no classes Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garnite 8 Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 just finished my LEAKED born this way ATTACKS remix ... tell me what you think and if you need to buy a song from me please inbox me i'm taking commissions!!!! now for the song... takes a while to get into it but the pay off is summink else i say! thoughts, feelings, retributions... ? ? hit. me! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
kupo 201 Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 The Exorcist bit at the end really sells it. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyle 345 Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Back in January of 2012 someone sent me Sylenth1. Who was that? :P Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyRichHooker 352 Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 just wondering if anyone would be able to make an acapella version of this for me please? I mainly need the first part before the vocals go all techno. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garnite 8 Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 due to overwhelming interest and fan attention i have decided to premier another leak from my productions for ARTPOP Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rollercoaster 2 Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 So, I wrote a song with Amy Winehouse in mind, as well as Gaga, and in general, anyone the media has torn apart, and the 27 club. Not too sure on the chorus, but it was only a quick draft, took 5 minutes. You just can't and won't leave well alone I've taken off your ring but you're always on my phone Take pictures if I'm on my fall from grace Build me up then tear me down, you've put me in my place Pour c-----e in the candy floss machine Creating clouds of ecstacy to float me into dreams Drinking makes me warm inside When your love blocks out all the light I never was a very pleasant soul You can't wait to watch me die Your flashes in my glossy eyes I was never ever destined to be old I'll fade out in the hotel tub I always was a fool for love And now I'm in the twenty seven club Sitting in the twenty seven club. You never thought about when I am gone You can't sing my brand new song if something has gone wrong The changes that I made have gone to waste Kiss me on the cheek on film and leave a bitter taste Pour c-----e in the candy floss machine Creating clouds of ecstacy to float me into dreams Drinking makes me warm inside When your love blocks out all the light I never was a very pleasant soul You can't wait to watch me die Your flashes in my glossy eyes I was never ever destined to be old I'll fade out in the hotel tub I always was a fool for love And now I'm in the twenty seven club Sitting in the twenty seven club. Oh I was too young to go so quietly But what choice on earth did I have You wouldn't let me be Now I'm riding on an angel wing I'm a distant memory, the one that used to sing Drinking makes me warm inside When your love blocks out all the light I never was a very pleasant soul You can't wait to watch me die Your flashes in my glossy eyes I was never ever destined to be old I'll fade out in the hotel tub I always was a fool for love And now I'm in the twenty seven club Sitting in the twenty seven club. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DirtyRichHooker 352 Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 just wondering if anyone would be able to make an acapella version of this for me please? I mainly need the first part before the vocals go all techno. Bump Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garnite 8 Posted February 22, 2013 Share Posted February 22, 2013 WOW Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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