wiltedbliss 914 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 :legend: Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buoy Boy 1 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 You have to go on a specific area such as 'conversation area' and there's a button at the top that says 'create new thread'. Â I was having an argument with a Belieber once and they called me 'bios-xual'. Thank youuu, i made a new thread in the conversation area with some of my lyrics :D and lol why? its one of my song titles thats why its my name haha Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Thank youuu, i made a new thread in the conversation area with some of my lyrics :D and lol why? its one of my song titles thats why its my name haha They were 11 I think they got a little confused. Â I'll be sure to check out your songs and lyrics! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Mess 1,393 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 So... Garageband is my hobby (no, I don't have a Mac), and I absolutely love writing/singing choruses. Their production is really simple ( I made it all on iPhone/iPad), and mostly there just to indicate the pace of the song. Nevertheless, since you guys are so kind and non-judgemental ( ), I decided to post them here. I have better songs in my mind, but I'm lazy and a student so I haven't recorded them yet.  Anyway, I'm excited for your feedback :)  1. Low: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/low  Lyrics: "I ust wanna give you a chance, so when you feel (I did not record these)  so effin' low  You'll know to whom you should resort  Don't worry girl  I'll let nothing bring you under  I'm gonna show  Show you that not all is lost  When you feel low brow  Just wake up and call my number"  2. Midnight Lover: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/midnight-lover  Lyrics:  "Oh would you risk it  or flee it,  Afraid to lose your sense of home  For I can offer you  a freedom  that you could never feel alone  Will you surrender  to the music  I know is deep down in your heart  I can hear the song of your body  when our bodies are one  from the sunset to the dawn  (this part I haven't recorded yet... Idk if it's good) And if you still wish to refuse it  I won't force you to come  By the daytime I'll be gone  Just a dream that came along"  3. Hypnotic: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/hypnotic-2  Lyrics:  "You're so hypnotic  can't get rid of your gaze  Girl I feel robotic  like a pawn inside your hands baby  Can we get erotic  ask it and I'll be your slave  I can't ignore it  I've been poisoned by your craze (3x)  4. Pop Lovers: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/pop-lovers  Lyrics:  "Some people say we're sick, but we just love pop music ( you know where I got this from )  Pop pop musi-i-i-ic  Some people say we're sick but we just love the beat  We love this trance  Some people might state that we dwell in insanity  Some might call us shallow but will follow our trends They will dance just like we dance"  5. Break you - instrumental: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/break-you-instrumental-1  Lyrics (mentally place them over the loudest part haha):  "I wanna save you  Save me  I wanna Break you  I wanna steal and then tear to pieces what is left of your heart (heart, heart)  I wanna be with you  Be with me  I wanna break you  Break me  Wanna consume every tear you cry until the last one falls (falls, falls)"  6. Last encounter: https://soundcloud.com/johmaze2/last-encounter  Lyrics (they're in a REALLY rough state [made them up like 1 hour ago], as the recording above, so try to criticize this one constructively instead of b---hing):  "Hey, over there  Was it you who told me that I should be strong  Warmed me up in the cold nights  when I was laying there alone  You don't seem to be the same to me  Now that I've seen what you've become (these last two lines are really just fillers, haven't thought of real     lyrics for this part)  I won't regret leaving you in bed  While you kiss another one  But anyway I miss you  I'm still dreaming of kissing you (same thing as the first parenthesis)  And hearing your voice flooding my ears again  Only your voice can soften the pain   May I still hear your voice?  Whispering how eternal is the truth in your lies  Do I still have a choice?  You had me on the moment I looked in your eyes"       I will keep udating the list whenever college and my creativity allow me :) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
SEVDALIZA 1,274 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Those are actually pretty good :clap: Good job :) operating from another world Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Mess 1,393 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 Those are actually pretty good :clap: Good job :) Omg really? Ty!!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sexxx 5,474 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 (edited) Midnight Lovers is really nice, sorta reminds me of Midnight City Hypnotic sounds very Madonna, good Edited March 23, 2013 by Ratchet Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jjang 2,262 Posted March 23, 2013 Share Posted March 23, 2013 What kind of effect do you use for your voice in Garage-Band and how do you upload it on soundcloud? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Galactic Mess 1,393 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 What kind of effect do you use for your voice in Garage-Band and how do you upload it on soundcloud? Large room + echo and reverbaration  Soundcloud shoul appear as one of the uploading/sharing options when you click on the "edit" button :) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PopReaper 2,122 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 I really like it! Â My favorite is Midnight lover Fun Fact: The K in KPop stands for "Kate Bush" Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambrosia 3,775 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 You know what I think, John. Â Â Â Â Â Do not do to others what angers you if done to you by others. -Socrates Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 :shy: Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiltedbliss 914 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 I really like them :clap: Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saint Laurent 4,862 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 (edited) I'm really sorry, I'm just having these splurges of creativity and I feel obliged to share them with you.  Here it is (I haven't written a hook yet..) -  I'm not thinking straight I think it may be too late My speech is slurring I'm in a state of not caring You caused my depression Left me with so much aggression  I think I'm over overdosing now And I think that you know how (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing) That Barbiturate has gotten into my system (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing) Don't tell them what I have done, Just tell them that I will miss them. (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing.) My heart won't die now now, It died long ago. (I'm over doing, I'm overdoing) Way back then, with Marilyn Monroe.   My heart will not die The amount that they gave me, It just wasn't enough And now that I've got more, I just don't feel so rough. The affects, I'm resisting I'm no longer existing. I think I'm over overdosing now And I think that you know how  (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing) That Barbiturate has gotten into my system (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing) Don't tell them what I have done, Just tell them that I will miss them. (I'm overdosing, I'm overdosing.) My heart won't die now now, It died long ago. (I'm over doing, I'm overdoing) Way back then, with Marilyn Monroe.  Thoughts? Edited March 24, 2013 by MorphineRevenge Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueVenusian 5 Posted March 24, 2013 Share Posted March 24, 2013 When I read the lyrics a trippy electro japanese song was in my head. Â Â Â That barbiturate has gotten into my system(Yeah!) I'm ovah-dosing, ova-dosin' Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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