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Rollercoaster

I wrote this with Britney Spears in mind... if she decides to take a 50 shades turn.

My heart beats

For the fluttering of

eye la-shes

Don't speak

I look your way

and in my mind it rains

it rains

storm clouds come

to play

With me

Before I can start to

begin to talk talk to you

the words fall outta my mouth

Baby would you like

to take off my clothes

maybe I'll be nice

and dance to make you blow

can't you imagine (you on a chair)

all this passion (put it in there)

Make me make me make me

...Boom!

You look like

you just choked on acid

or some thing

I think

I can't breathe

suddenly you're holding me

choke me

Spank me!

Before I can start to

begin to talk talk to you

the words fall outta my mouth

Baby would you like

to take off my clothes

maybe I'll be nice

and dance to make you blow

can't you imagine (you on a chair)

all this passion (put it in there)

Make me make me make me

...Boom!

Never thought that I could die and stay alive

because it feels like I'm in heaven

even though I'm not breathing

with your body warming mine

now I think it's time

it's time to

make me make me make me

make me make me

...boom!

Before I can start to

begin to talk talk to you

the words fall outta my mouth

Baby would you like

to take off my clothes

maybe I'll be nice

and dance to make you blow

can't you imagine (you on a chair)

all this passion (put it in there)

Make me make me make me

...Boom!

It's... disjointedly kinky...

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Rollercoaster

Oooh inspiration comes in strange shapes.

Working on track "Happy pills" which is like a piano ballad mixed with a rhythmic swayer... like "let it be" ballad you can sway to.

Rather scarily, it's about self medicating antidepressants and various other mood enhancers to take away the pain of rape but as the song progresses, the singer is taking pills as she is being raped/abused, in order to kill the pain. It's quite graphic but has metaphor to cover it... excited, just need to write an instrumental and rewrite the lyrics to fit :D

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That sounds amazing! :legend:

 

The "Testpressung!" vinyl clip :rockstar:

Thank you!

Would you mind liking and sharing the page?

On 18 Jan 2014 we'll release the album on vinyl!

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  • 3 weeks later...
Cameron Dallas

http://soundcloud.com/thenightofficialmusic/i-wish-yo-could-see-take-1

 

A first take of another original song of mine, "I Wish Yoü Could See".

 

Tentative Lyrics

I cried, just slightly

When you said to me

That you thought I

Was life's great beauty.

 

But the tears came down,

When I could perceive,

That you weren't willing,

To likewise receive.

 

My love, your beautiful

Don't ever doubt that.

On the outside, inside

Every inch of your being.

 

I'd give up my life,

To be your beauty again,

But I'd rather know that you

Were finally seeing...

 

I wish yoü could see

The beauty you hold

The light in your eyes

Warms me from the cold.

 

The way that you smile,

The way that you beam,

The way that you are

It makes me wanna scream!

 

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see,

The beauty I see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could, too

See the beauty in yoü!

 

When we talked last night,

You seemed alright,

But I could tell

That you were still in the blight.

 

It doesn't leave one,

So easily.

But trust me when

I say this, chees-ily:

 

My love, you're beautiful

To my heart

I can't forget you

Though I've done my part.

 

But I'd rather know,

That you've realized

The beautiful person

That you hold inside...

 

I wish yoü could see

The beauty you hold

The light in your eyes

Warms me from the cold.

 

The way that you smile,

The way that you beam,

The way that you are

It makes me wanna scream!

 

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see,

The beauty I see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could, too

See the beauty in yoü!

 

“If you can't handle me at my worst,

than you sure as hell don't serve me at my best!â€

The good sis, Marilyn,

She knew how it was.

And I agree with her,

If only because:

 

My love, you're beautiful,

Good times and bad.

I see past the

pessimistic facade.

 

I just hope you can see,

If not today than tomorrow,

That you're beautiful,

And look past this sorrow...

 

I wish yoü could see

The beauty you hold

The light in your eyes

Warms me from the cold.

 

The way that you smile,

The way that you beam,

The way that you are

It makes me wanna scream!

 

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see,

The beauty I see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could see!

I wish yoü could, too

See the beauty in yoü!

 

I wish yoü could see...

 

© The Night

I love your voice in this one and the Officer one :flutter:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Can someone help me produce a song for my demo? I can send you a sample of the melody and my voice :spin:

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Pop Art

I love your voice in this one and the Officer one :flutter:

Oh my God thank you, that means so much to me!

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  • 2 weeks later...

My new track.. it's a little different but I hope people like it :)

 

http://soundcloud.com/daneastonmusic/dan-easton-shapeshifter

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Hey guys!

Please check out my new cover of Wake Me Up by Avicii. i've slown it down and put it on piano. Love the lyrics so thought this really brought them out.

http://youtu.be/BLMoHiyP1E8

If you liked it please like my wee Facebook page for stuff and things coming really soon :)

www.facebook.com/ronanboylemusic

Thanks in advance! :P

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I haven't posted here for a while, but I wanted to share this #shamelesspromo :pawsup:

Finally reached the point when I'm happy with the way this one sounds: I absolutely love it. I hope you feel the same. Take a listen, and let me know what you think. I tweaked both the instrumental and the vocals (and even if I find something else to tweak, I'll just be able to swap the audio on SC cause I upgraded to Pro).



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http://soundcloud.com/ashesborn/royal-treatment-1

 


All you desire is waiting behind
These castle walls
The closer you get, the further they seem
What are the odds?

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?
The crown awaits you

Say your prayers
Hear the choir sing your name:
Long live the mighty king,
Just be prepared to lose it all
When they don’t need you anymore

Wait at the gates while the bells chime
Hindered again
Reach through the thorns, only blue blood
Will get you in (will get you in)

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?
What else is left to sacrifice?

Say your prayers
Hear the choir sing your name:
Long live the mighty king,
Just be prepared to lose it all
When they don’t need you anymore

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?
The ruler of a doomed empire

Say your prayers
Hear the choir sing your name:
Long live the mighty king,
Just be prepared to lose it all
When they don’t need you anymore


 

FACEBOOK | TUMBLR | SOUNDCLOUD

#plug #getdatpromo

P.S. I have a really cool idea for the cover, but I have to get the props I need first and arrange a photoshoot for that.

 

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I haven't posted here for a while, but I wanted to share this #shamelesspromo :pawsup:

Finally reached the point when I'm happy with the way this one sounds: I absolutely love it. I hope you feel the same. Take a listen, and let me know what you think. I tweaked both the instrumental and the vocals (and even if I find something else to tweak, I'll just be able to swap the audio on SC cause I upgraded to Pro).

1fcpwp.png

 

http://soundcloud.com/ashesborn/royal-treatment-1

 

All you desire is waiting behind

These castle walls

The closer you get, the further they seem

What are the odds?

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?

The crown awaits you

Say your prayers

Hear the choir sing your name:

Long live the mighty king,

Just be prepared to lose it all

When they don’t need you anymore

Wait at the gates while the bells chime

Hindered again

Reach through the thorns, only blue blood

Will get you in (will get you in)

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?

What else is left to sacrifice?

Say your prayers

Hear the choir sing your name:

Long live the mighty king,

Just be prepared to lose it all

When they don’t need you anymore

Did you deserve it? Have you paid the price?

The ruler of a doomed empire

Say your prayers

Hear the choir sing your name:

Long live the mighty king,

Just be prepared to lose it all

When they don’t need you anymore

 

FACEBOOK | TUMBLR | SOUNDCLOUD

#plug #getdatpromo

P.S. I have a really cool idea for the cover, but I have to get the props I need first and arrange a photoshoot for that.

 

This is truly fantastic! :applause::music:

 

 I am floored, and in love! :omg: Well done, Ashes; I look forward to hearing more - let me know if I can buy/DL this sometime hehe! :giveup:

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