KrisFromMars 9 Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Hey monsters I'm looking for a producer who lives in NYC to help make a instrumental for my lyrics. I want to join this songwriter workshop but I have to send three songs to the place in order for them to consider me. I have the lyrics and melody I just need a beat for them. If u an help me please let me know or PM me TY:) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BellaDonnaDiana 0 Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 (edited) Breathe Again ~Verse 1~ You're false imagery In a land of make believe You're a lie to yourself Begging on your knees I am just waiting alone Back where we made love Why can't you admit You hate being on your own ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Post Chorus~ Let it all out x 3 and breathe again (x4) ~Hook~ Like a dagger in my heart Twisted right from the start (repeat x4) ~Verse 2~ Where did you go You lying animal Im on the hunt now Its your lies that show I've given up too much Now its your turn to know When someones had enough They get up and go! ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Post Chorus~ Let it all out x 3 and breathe again (x4) ~Hook 2~ Like an arrow in my side I've got nowhere left to hide (repeat x4) ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Bridge~ I've waited long enough For you to show love It's time for you to stop Its time for me to go I need some time for myself I need some time to rebuild I need some time To breathe again ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~ Hook 1+2 ~ Like a dagger in my heart Twisted right from the start (x 2) Like an arrow in my side I've nowhere left to hide (x 2) Edited March 11, 2013 by BellaDonna Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KING5KAT 223 Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Breathe Again ~Verse 1~ You're false imagery In a land of make believe You're a lie to yourself Begging on your knees I am just waiting alone Back where we made love Why can't you admit You hate being on your own ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Post Chorus~ Let it all out x 3 and breathe again (x4) ~Hook~ Like a dagger in my heart Twisted right from the start (repeat x4) ~Verse 2~ Where did you go You lying animal Im on the hunt now Its your lies that show I've given up too much Now its your turn to know When someones had enough They get up and go! ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Post Chorus~ Let it all out x 3 and breathe again (x4) ~Hook 2~ Like an arrow in my side I've got nowhere left to hide (repeat x4) ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~Bridge~ I've waited long enough For you to show love It's time for you to stop Its time for me to go I need some time for myself I need some time to rebuild I need some time To breathe again ~Chorus~ Your lips drain me fast Each time we touch I need some time To breathe again I have no time left for All your false love I need some time To breathe again ~ Hook 1+2 ~ Like a dagger in my heart Twisted right from the start (x 2) Like an arrow in my side I've nowhere left to hide (x 2) It's so sweet to see you're influenced by me - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R1zkjJW7cZ4 I'm kidding! really great! This thread has been so dead recently! There used to be pages every week! where did everyone go? :( Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BellaDonnaDiana 0 Posted March 11, 2013 Share Posted March 11, 2013 Original piece honey! HahA!! I have more where thsi came from... if I can be Ceebs finding it It's so sweet to see you're influenced by me - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R1zkjJW7cZ4 I'm kidding! really great! This thread has been so dead recently! There used to be pages every week! where did everyone go? :( Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiltedbliss 915 Posted March 12, 2013 Share Posted March 12, 2013 Ok, so I wrote an amazing song and me and my friend wanna record it! Is there anyone out here willing to produce a song which won't be officially released? Like we'll just put it on YouTube and soundcloud and you will be credited. Please!!! We need this so badly! :( Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bowie 4 Posted March 12, 2013 Share Posted March 12, 2013 Ok, so I wrote an amazing song and me and my friend wanna record it! Is there anyone out here willing to produce a song which won't be officially released? Like we'll just put it on YouTube and soundcloud and you will be credited. Please!!! We need this so badly! :( PM me :) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiltedbliss 915 Posted March 12, 2013 Share Posted March 12, 2013 Also, we'll send you our vocals online or thru what'sapp or something. Please!! :( Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wiltedbliss 915 Posted March 12, 2013 Share Posted March 12, 2013 :eek: SENT!!!!!! omg!! Thank youuuuuu!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiunzhan 996 Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 Yay 1st page wooowowoowowo!!!! http://soundcloud.com/jamalholt :hor: Jamal Holt, you follow me on twitter, I do too You're a music genius Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bamboo 8 Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 So when you guys write songs, do you write the music or do you just write lyrics and remember the melody? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BellaDonnaDiana 0 Posted March 14, 2013 Share Posted March 14, 2013 for mine Breathe Again... I have a melody... I can sing it etc... and I will be providing that all soon... maybe... I can't sing but I will do a demo .. it maybe chip munked lol! it is a depeche mode inspired song.... sonically.. So when you guys write songs, do you write the music or do you just write lyrics and remember the melody? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
KING5KAT 223 Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 How long does it take you guys to produce a track (instrumental)? It normally takes me about 6/7 hours to complete the instrumental for a demo, but I had this great idea yesterday and I spent 9 hours on it and it's pretty much 60% done. It's sounding brilliant but I just wanted to know how long you guys spend on yours :) Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbuHassan1992 766 Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 How long does it take you guys to produce a track (instrumental)? It normally takes me about 6/7 hours to complete the instrumental for a demo, but I had this great idea yesterday and I spent 9 hours on it and it's pretty much 60% done. It's sounding brilliant but I just wanted to know how long you guys spend on yours :) I lay it down pretty quickly, but then I spend hours, sometimes days tweaking it Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bowie 4 Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 I lay it down pretty quickly, but then I spend hours, sometimes days tweaking it This tbh But my ones are hardly amazing. I mainly produce ballads/pop, whereas I sing & write EDM, Prog. Rock and Disco/Dance numbers. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariano 958 Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Omg I am such a flop I didn't know there was such thread ... My fav thread now ;) I've been writing "songs" or should I say lyrics for some time now and I can sing them and I remember the melody but I can't write music, just lyrics :) So If I sing a song acapella , can a producer make this melody and etc ? I am sorry If the question is stupid but I really want to know If there is a point in writing only lyrics :) I can post some lines because I don't want to post a whole lyrics(song) cuz I am scared :confuse: so here I go: All I want from you is nothing more than everything. All the love from you is more than enough,it gives me wings. this is part of the Chorus from "All I want" You gave me everything but time You gave me life, then took it, such a crime. You make me believe in something unreal You ignored the feelings like love is a deal. this is unfinished ... It doesn't have even a name yet I have only 5-6 full songs and some unfinished and a 1401294 lines that doesn't fit anywhere but I still wait for the time when I will be just like aw I will finish this and for around 5 minutes I will write a whole song after waiting for months.. but It never works when I say I will write some lyrics... With me it happens really weird... while watching a movie / listening to a song / being out and writing on my phone because later I will forgot everything and etc... Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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