David Ward 8,815 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 Here are some of my songs. I composed these tracks myself :) Hopeless - Instrumental [Demo] http://soundcloud.com/iamdavidward/hopeless-instrumental-demo Pop Song - Instrumental [Demo] http://soundcloud.com/iamdavidward/pop-song-instrumental-demo You can check out more at my Souncloud page. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
candiedroses 408 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 (edited) I need opinions again (I can't find my old thread) about my song. I've made some changes, and it's still an instrumental, though I have been working on the lyrics. I also am still working on a stronger drumline for the song, too. I only have the instrumental track done and the backing vocals/vocal instruments to simulate horns and violins. Please give me your most honest and critical opinions, I will not take anything personally. EDIT: HQ audio version now: http://soundcloud.com/miller_aaron_k/until-the-end-hq-demo , still MP3 quality though. Edited July 14, 2012 by millerkrause Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
GagaOopsy 26 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 Other then just hearing "AHHHH" all the time , I think the beat is pretty good :D Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit the frog 1,895 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 Its pretty good! Dancing to it rn Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
windzo 716 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 I can't really say much about it, I like it and at the same time I don't idk it just seem like something is missing (no not the vocals) something with the beat I don't thing this is helping much Maybe the final production of it will make me like or if not love it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Judaslover96 0 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 well even though it is instrumental, i would add vocals. it is a terrific poece of worl it needs a bigger part in the climax of the whole song. maybe adda bad romance like Bass type to it where it sounds in one or two parts like a cannon going of or an 80s beat going through parts. it is fantastic though..i felt like i was listenig to a remix a dj did Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
candiedroses 408 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 (edited) Other then just hearing "AHHHH" all the time , I think the beat is pretty good :D Thanks, I agree with the "AHHHH" comment, as of right now the sound is just a placeholder until I find something better. Its pretty good! Dancing to it rn Hahah thanks... the GIF... :O I can't really say much about it, I like it and at the same time I don't idk it just seem like something is missing (no not the vocals) something with the beat I don't thing this is helping much Maybe the final production of it will make me like or if not love it I agree, it definitely is missing something and I have yet to find exactly what it is. well even though it is instrumental, i would add vocals. it is a terrific poece of worl it needs a bigger part in the climax of the whole song. maybe adda bad romance like Bass type to it where it sounds in one or two parts like a cannon going of or an 80s beat going through parts. it is fantastic though..i felt like i was listenig to a remix a dj did Thanks, I really appriciate your feedback! I definitely agree with your comments! Edited July 14, 2012 by millerkrause Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kermit the frog 1,895 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 Here are the lyrics for you guys: Verse: AAaaaaah AAaaaaah Pre-chorus: AaaaAAAAAh AaaaAAAAAh Chorus: AAAAAAAAH AAAAAAAAH AAAAAAAAH Bridge: Ah ah ah ahhhh Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
realtalk 0 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 hai guyz i was wondering y i cant make a topic sum1 help me out?? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lion Heart 15,041 Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 hai guyz i was wondering y i cant make a topic sum1 help me out?? I believe you need around 50 posts or so. ----------- @ millerkrause: I really liked the ending :yes: ▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
00000000 1 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 My new BTW RMX. http://soundcloud.com/oh_blax/born-this-way-just-be-a-queen it's very slo0o0o0o0o0o0o0ow. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeffreyJ 0 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 OH HIIIIIIIII :) here's ALL my music it would be amazingly amazing if you s-xy b---hes listened to it! <3 http://youtube.com/zeffreyjofficial and if youu wannaaa follow mehh on twittaaaa http://www.twitter.com/IHATEZEFFREYJ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
00000000 1 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 OH HIIIIIIIII :) here's ALL my music it would be amazingly amazing if you s-xy b---hes listened to it! <3 http://youtube.com/zeffreyjofficial and if youu wannaaa follow mehh on twittaaaa http://www.twitter.com/IHATEZEFFREYJ reminds me of the millioniares, especially DJ Turn This Up. you were made for the club bby. :hor: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomkid 0 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 (edited) My first ever Set/Mixtape is here! Please take a listen by clicking on this link: http://soundcloud.com/djmoonbeatmusic/sets/dj-moonbea/ Please leave feedback for me! Thank you! Also, Vocals are needed! Please contact me if you want to add your vocals to one (or more) of these tracks! Album Artwork: http://i1.sndcdn.com...nal.png?62b09b1 Edited July 15, 2012 by randomkid Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeffreyJ 0 Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 reminds me of the millioniares, especially DJ Turn This Up. you were made for the club bby. thanksss babeee! :) lovesss it! <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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