Moebius 8,965 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 im not an artist, i never did a portrait before, but judge it cause i dont even care anymore Always loved Venus and it's visuals, i was trying to paint this one the bulge thing on the head is a little too big, face should be longer, "looks like a dude" getting this from my friends, and hair should be longer but the paper was not big enough maybe someone will like it idk here u go ggd The Most Popular Girls in School megarate is cancelled! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 i think its very avant garde and amazing! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
slayo 7,664 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 If you "don't even care anymore", then why did you post it? Your attitude seems terrible. Art is all about practice, and this is good practice to do. Keep at it! Make it stupid! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katharine Hepburn 4,607 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 It's better than anything I could make but you can't make a masterpiece first time. I mean someone as talented as Gaga had to write thousands of songs until she got to her level xoxo Joanne Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas 26,774 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 It's not bad at all, I can't even draw a circle, keep working on your skills and your drawing will improve Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
judxs 762 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I can definitely see your potential in it...heck I couldn't draw anything like this. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drin Lon 7,875 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 It's not bad for a beginner, not bad at all. Don't listen to people and don't just say "I don't even care" when somebody doesn't like what you've done. It all comes down to if you're passionate about what you are doing or not and if you are, then just keep doing it and you'll get better each time Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominic 11,922 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 It's not bad, maybe add some more shadows to give it a bit more depth. Keep at it. Rome wasn't built in a day The hardest thing in this world is to live in it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
donutellha 13,819 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 the original drawing is watercolor and pencil, I believe try shading with a pencil with a light hand so it pops, looks great so far. Walk down the runway but don't puke, it's okay. You just had 10 donuts today. Without frosting. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
melon 3,584 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 looks amazing! I really love the hair especially! wish I had the willpower/time to create something like you have show me to me please Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bolkins 4,125 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I don't think it's bad for a beginner by any means. I can't draw hair for **** and the way you've caputured the movement of the waves has been done well. Watch some YouTube videos, get some tips and just keep at it because you seem to have a good eye already it just needs a bit more refining 'tis all. Not the bore worms! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killa 17,461 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 i thought making her manly was on on purpose girl you gotta be smarter with these things, an error can turn into a special trait. And welp, EpioneGa isn't that different from the shape you gave ha. Keep practising Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dayman 6,169 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 You actually have the potential to make some really great work. I'm not gonna bs you here though. It's definitely not the greatest drawing ever. But the only way to get better is to keep drawing. I always hear people saying to me "Oh you're just naturally so talented at drawing." and that's not the case at all! I'm only good at art because I draw every single day and have been drawing every single day since I was probably about 4. Keep at it and you'll be a killer artist - because even though it's not a perfect drawing you have some good work in it. The 2 problems I see with this are the proportions and the hair. The hair looks scratchy and poofy. You want to keep continuous lines for strands, think of how real hair flows, try and keep that fluidity. The yellow part on the left towards the bottom has that fluidity somewhat. But the right side of the hair doesn't. As for the proportions the best thing I can suggest is using basic shapes as a guide and look for continuous lines in your reference. Here's one example of what I mean. If you keep on giving at it and practicing in a years time alone you can do some really amazing work. Also, don't be afraid to trace. Tracing pictures really helps you learn believe it or not. Following those contours and lines exactly will help give you a better idea of how to to do it yourself when you start from scratch. Please keep going, you have a good foundation to start from, but you won't get any better unless you keep on trying and practicing! Use tutorials online and Youtube videos too! I make and sell my artwork for a living and even I still watch videos and look up tutorials to continue to learn! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RonnieGagz 4,300 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I believe that a lot artists can't see the greatness of their work Just sayin that your drawing is good ♡Gaga♡TØP♡Nightwish♡Lana♡Lorde♡Grimes♡ Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JazzGa 14,620 Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 If you'd like to know why people tell you she "looks like a dude", it's because the neck is too thick and the eyes are too close together. But you have a good feel for copying shapes in general, the scorpion and her lips look nice. Dayman's advice is really good. Practice doing some less detailed sketches of faces so you can get a feel for proportions. You pay good attention to detail but need to practice getting accurate proportions. Don't give up, you'll improve a lot as long as you keep practicing My old cat is a tough man, but i cant deny the way he bites my hand and he stabs me, he grabs me by my heart <3 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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